“You're not leaving me Susan!” Yes, the hell I am. I'm tired of being the weak little girl he controls. If he thinks he's gonna keep me here forever, he's got another thing coming.


I ran to any open door I can find, every single one was locked every single one, taking a left I finally managed to open a door, turning the door knob, I stepped into the room locking the door.  Letting out a breathe I didn't know I was holding. Slowly sliding down the door frame. My heart beated so fast, to say I was scared was an understatement.

I was terrified, I was terrified that he was going to kill my family, I was terrified that after all of this he was going to finally kill me. I couldn't move it seemed as if the weight of the world was on my shoulders.

"Zoey?" A weak voice whispered.

I sharply turned to my left, my neck cracking as I did. I winced at the sharp pain that shot  through out my neck.

"Susan?" I looked at her relieved.

"I thought you were dead!" She said worried.

"Nope, not yet!" I managed to crack a smile.

"What are we gonna do? He can't find out that I'm still alive then he'll keep us both!" She warned.

"He's not." I simply said.

"He's not?"

"No, were gonna get out of her."  I lied, truth is I don't know if were even gonna get out of this house alive.

She crawled over to me, taking slow cautious steps. Her fingers trembled as she pointed to the door, I was kneeling on. I looked at her confused. She brought her fingers to her lips and made a 'shh' sound with her voice. I stiffened as I heard. Slow heavy footsteps coming towards our door. My eyes widened in fear.

"Zoey?" A voice yelled from downstairs. Christine's voice yelled from downstairs. What is she doing here? He's gonna kill her! 

The footsteps abruptly stopped and turned heading downstairs.

Christine's POV

(Two hours earlier)

"Is this boy you?" I asked Chace for the fifth time, his eyes pierced mine.

"Yeah it is."

"How do you know Zoey?" I started to get aggravated. I heard him gulp. It was then that it hit me, That's why he always followed me around, he was making sure I didn't find her.

"You bastard! You know this whole entire damn time where she was didn't you?" He nodded weakly.

"Where is she?" I said dangerously low.

"He'll kill you Christine." He gripped my shoulders slightly.

"I don't care." Taking his arms off of me, pushing him away from me.

"Please you can't let him kill her. Please Chace you have to help me!" I pleaded.

"He'll kill my brother!" He argued.

"We can save him!" I argued back raising my voice.


He finally agreed to my plan. We pulled up to a large house in the middle of nowhere, The forest seemed to cover the entire house.

We hid the car behind a large tree, about five feet away from the house. I stepped out and rushed to the house, and turn the door knob stepping into the house.

"Christine!" I heard Chace hiss from behind me. I ignored him and yelled,

"Zoey?" It was then that I realized that I wasn't thinking rationally and that I had just made a big mistake.

Chace pulled me behind a counter, looked at me with angry filling his eyes. He was about to say something when we heard large heavy creaks ascending from the stairs.


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