Before Starting

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I feel the need to say this due to all the comments on the prologue, but I'm not discouraging comments. I love them, and I'll gladly take any criticism for this book. However, I do understand how choppy and hard to read the first chapter is. I also understand that it really doesn't make that much sense.

I wrote this book almost entirely in 6th and 7th grade. It isn't that surprising that my writing sounds like it sometimes. I need to edit this book so much, I just don't have the time or inspiration. One day, I might even republish this with a slightly different plot to smooth everything over. But today is not that day. Tomorrow isn't that day either.

In simple words:

Prologue = Choppy

Rest of book = Less choppy

Ok, I'm done.

(Virtual cookies to anyone who actually read this!)

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