This is the first chapter! :) The first one will be kind of boring because it's just showing how she escaped and all but i promise you the others will be better.
So,hope you like it! I would love some feedback,just let me know if something is wrong with my writing or typos etc. and i'll try and fix it :) Thx!
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Chapter I part I:Escaping
OKAY,so the whole idea thing wasn't working out very well.First thing is,even though I have 20/20 vision,I don't have superpowers or nightvision eyes.So I couldn't find the door and kept on tripping over things.Like that is going to help.No,it just made it harder...and painful.
I rubbed my chin and my elbow for the tenth time.Seriously,what is in this room? A whole bunch of crates of dynamite?!
You know,sometimes I find myself completely stupid,because I just happen to have a light source with me.Not a very strong one,but still usable anyways.By now,I think you should now what I'm talking about? No? Well,the answer is...my cellphone.I flipped it open and groan in desperation.
Oh great! Just when I needed it most,it goes "Low battery! Low battery!"Oh,shut up!
"Stupid phone!"I scolded it angrily.Before the battery died,I saw a door straight ahead and walked towards it.Then boom.
Complete darkness."Whoa!"I exclaimed and tripped over something...again.
"Owww,"I moan in pain quietly and got up quickly.By now,those guys would have probably heard all the noise and would come and check things out.Oh goodie! A part of my plan i working! Now,I just have to go with the flow.
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Just like I had predicted,moments later the sound of footsteps hurrying down a few flight of stairs made its way towards the room and I couldn't help but snicker.
When the man opened this tiny circle-ish thing outside,it let in a straight beam of light in.Oh,it's a peep hole,I though in realisation.Now then...
I banged at the door,pretending to moan and groan."Please! Please let me out! I feel sick! I think I've got sea sick! Please! I think I'll die in here!!"I pleaded.He seemed unconvinced,so I banged the door again,only this time,I banged it lots of times.This only made the guy outside irritated and angry.
He banged back from the other side of the door and growled.I swear the whole room shook from that hit.I immediately shut up.Oh,but that doesn't mean I gave up.Oh no,I am sooo NOT giving up.I'll do everything I can to get out of this dreadful place!
So,this time I tried a different tactic."Okay,I lied,I don't feel sick and I don't have seasick.But I am hungry!! Please,can't I have some food and water?"I say,being completely honest.What?I've been in a ship in a locked,dark,stinking room for hours without air,food or water! And miraculously I'm still alive!
The guy grunt and left,forgetting to close the peep hole.I couldn't hold myself back.I peeped through it and saw a clean and polished deck.Whoa! And what is that? A swimming pool? Oh my crackers,they even have a flat-screen TV?! (not that I've never seen one,since I live in fame).Awesome!!
What is wrong with me?
A part of me slapped me across the face inside,another part of me kept on gawking at all the richness outside.