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Since notifications are hit or miss, I decided to add an author's note instead... Don't worry, it won't be up for long as I don't like these in general.

Get to the point, Roshelle.

Basically, after running this by a couple of beta readers, I've received general feedback concerning the characters and the plot and realize it needs some revamping.

I was trying to figure out why I lose readers (and I'm still stuck on these numbers) and I've learned that there's nothing to keep anyone interested in the first half of the story. I did try to get answers from those on here who didn't finish the story but they didn't tell me. I'm going to assume they knew something wasn't right, but couldn't tell me what that was.

Does it need to be changed?

Absolutely yes. These characters deserve to have the best story I can produce. So while one part of me doesn't want to be back to another draft again, it's the best thing for the story. Rather than unpublish the whole thing, I'm going to write everything out and repost it entirely when I'm done.

So why am I telling you this? I want to let you know in case you're thinking of reading this story that it's your choice to do so, but I completely understand if you want to hold off reading (or even want to remove it from your library).

On the off chance you want to read it again once I finish, I hope the new, improved version meets your approval. Not everything will make it back on Wattpad but I hope what makes the cut does the characters justice.

Unfortunately, my day job sucks the fun (and any desire to write) right out of me. That along with other stuff going on means I don't have the time I want to dedicate to getting this done. I can't give an exact date since I have other stories to finish, but rest assured I finish what I start.

Eventually...

Thanks to those of you who've read and commented. Wish me luck and I look forward to hearing what you think of the next edition of Lethal Intent. It's the least I can do for wonderful supporters like you.

Happy reading and Wattpadding.

Take care everyone!

Roshelle

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