I need some help.

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So I applied for something with my book "Erisyll." And my book was looked over by some screeners and judges. So they told me I needed to edit some stuff (WHICH I AM TOTALLY FINE WITH AND I AM GLAD THEY GAVE ME STUFF TO CRITIQUE THIS IS NOT ME WHINING)

I've been reading over what they said and even researching it and then looking at the text of my story and I am still so confused.

I've been reading over what they said and even researching it and then looking at the text of my story and I am still so confused

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I think I write in an active voice but idk? I'm not sure. Can someone explain the difference between active and passive? Because when I looked at my story I thought I was writing in active.

~a very confused Lorna

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