Chapter 1

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Author's Notes Which You're Supposed to Read: (Hint, hint): It's here! The sequel! AH! I know, there's a lot of comments picked for this chapter. But...there were so MANY!

Quotes of the Day:

"HHHHOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLYYYYYY SHHHHHHHHHHITTTTTTTT! Thats how you end the fucking story? I gotta say one thing though to Rachel: Good use of the words Fuck Fucking and any other variation of those two. Oh yeah, and I should done wwwwaaaaaaaayyyyy more than just puch him. I bet he was like, 'OMFG Who the hell are these 3 girls that just beat the crap outta me? It's like they know what awful things I've done!' You know what, Ima go and get that dart board I got for Christmas, draw a picture of Adam using whatever characteristics you mentioned and then tape it up and go nuts. In fact, my neighbor works in some place where they give him free eggs, and he just gave us a dozen. And I have my fists. It's go-time, asshole." -Longtime321

"HOLY MOTHER FUCKER,HOW MANY TIMES DID U USE THE WORK FUCK?HOLY SHIT.AND THAT FUCKING DOUCHE BAG,PRANCING AROUND AND SAYING"MY HEART IS WITH RACHAEL,MY HEART IS WITH RACHAEL"IF YOUR DAMN FUCKING PATHETIC HEART IS WITH RACHAEL THEN WHY DID U FUCKING SO AND PRACTICALLY EAT ANOTHER HOE BAG'S FACE?WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU DUDE????????????????IF I EVER SEE I'M GONNA GET A SHOTGUN AND SHOOT YOUR MANHOOD SO MANY FUCKING TIMES! O AND WHY THE FUCK DIDN'T RACHEL JUST KICK HIS WORTHLESS ASS.IF IT WERE ME I WOULD HAVE AFTER,SHOOTING HIS BALLS,GONE AND TAKEN A PINK HAIR DYE THEN COLORED HIS HAIR PINK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!STUPID MOTHER FUCKING BITCH,PEE-LICKING CRAP FACE,MAN-WHORE,ASS WIPE,ASS FACE,ASSHOLE,MOTHER FUCKER, DOUCHE,DICK.HE'S A DICK.NO,HE HAS NO DICK THAT WHY HE ISN'T AFTER RACHAEL.*AFTER USING AWESOME KUNG-FU ON HIS ASS,SPITS IN FACE.STEPS ON ALREADY SHOT BALLS,WRAPS UP WITH PLASTIC,TAKES TO A SHREDDER AND SHREDS HIM TO PIECES AND THEN FEEDS TO PET GOLD-FISH FIFI!*BLOODY MOTHERFUCKER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!btw love the story and whats the name of the sequel?PLZ TELL.i know i can be bi-polar at times." -rockoutchick1135

"Ok now that ive said thanks its ~ angry rant time~ HOW COULD THAT IDIOTIC, METAL, BRAIN DAMAGED, FUCKING SYCOTIC, LOSER, A- HOLE ...(MORE MEAN WORDS HERE)...JERK DO THAT (BTW IM TALKING ABOUT ADAM IF U R STUPID AND ITS NOT OBVIOUS) IT IS LIKE HE WAS SO MENTAL AND MEAN THAT HE DIDNT NOTICE BUT WHO COULD NOT NOTICE THAT! I MEAN SERIOUSLY IT IS LIKE BOYS R MEANT 2 RUIN LIFES. I HATE ADAM SO MUCH I SWEAR THAT IF I WAS TALKING A DEAF PERSON COULD HEAR THE HATE IN MY VOICE. I SWEAR IF U DO NOT RITE A SEQUEL WHERE ADAM IS BEGGING ON HIS HANDS AND KNEES 4 HER 2 LISTEN 2 HIM AND THEN HE BETTER HAV 1 HELL OF A EXPLANATION! IF HE DOESN'T THEN I WILL PERSONALLY GO INTO THE BOOK AND ARRANGE 4 SOME ONE 2MAKE HIM SCREAM SO LOUD THAT SPACE PEOPLE WILL HEAR HIS CRIES OF AGONY AND IT WONT STOP THERE I WILL TEAR HIM LIMB FROM LIMB IN TILL HIS SCREAMS R SO LOUD U CANT HERE THEM ANYMORE! HECK EVEN IF HE DOES DO THAT I WILL STILL GO IN THERE AND SLAP HIM SILLY TILL I AM SURE HE WILL NEVER BETRAY RACHELLE AGAIN! YEAH I KNOW 4 MY AGE I SURE AM EVIL BUT HEY IT IS MY SIGNATURE!" -ShopDivaKels97

"WHAT?!?!?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (sorry. Havin a Luke skywalker moment)HOW COULD YOU!!!!! IT CANT END LIKE THAT!!! WHY IS HE WITH THAT SKANK!!! IM SO MAD @ YOU I COULD STAB YOU WITH A SPORK!!(Even though I won't cause the guys from either the show bones or csi will find me D:)" -blondewarrior97

"fuck just became my new favorite word!!(eww not like that pervs)  

the fucking pathetic excuse of a boy better get over there this fucking secong before i jump into this story and fuckin bitch slap him i really wouldn't mind doing all the fucking dirty work rachel wasn't fucking able to do. *snifle* and that fucking boy better have a good fucking excuse for doing what he fucking did!!! *tear drop fall* that fucking liar when he said rachel was his life *another tear drop fall* he'd be fucking dead without her!!!! instead of just fucking standing there he should of fucking ran to her and fucking worshiped her ecause she fucking deserved it!!!!and that boyfriend stealing slut should go to hell where she will become a maid to all those people she fuckin stepped on and then eventually get her heart broken not once or twice or thrice times but four times and she'll get pregnant and and......(use ur imagination)  

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