You guys! I cannot believe this! After I wrote the first chapter yesterday, my inbox was piling with messages about comments and votes on 'Alone'! Thank you so much, I feel like I've got a fanbase now, and maybe this time I can ask for more votes and comments!! I got 7 votes and 5 comments, and even more, I've had 52 reads!!!!! Thank you guys!
Okay so I have decided on the answers to the questions. You guys came up with so many ideas for the house names but I had to choose just two!
@Mooshtafa and @EdensA both came up with my favourite two, one was eagle from @EdensA which a few other people commented too, but she had ideas for the type of eagle which gave her the edge, and @Mooshtafa came up with one I had never heard of before, cassowary! so the names will be Albatross, Pelican, Eagle and Cassowary!
I have said to some people who's ideas didn't get selected that I will work them in. They won't be names for the houses but I will try to work them into the story somehow. I have decided I will keep the chapter how it is, but this is an extra part called chapter 2 continued because it links to the previous part, so I hope you guys enjoy it, love you all! xxxxxxxx :)
As we stood there at the front of the room my hands started sweating up. Mr. Marshall was standing in front of us, leaning on a desk with his arms over his short tubby body crossed. He cleared his throat preparing to speak.
"I have been observing little learning as a result of seating," the teacher said coldly looking over his circular framed reading glasses at James Black and Brett Rolland who sniggered to each other and shared a subtle fist bump. The teacher proceeded on, "I have decided to make new seating arrangements because of this."
Most people groaned and made rude remarks to the boys, "Quiet!" The teacher bellowed. Then his voice calmed down, "I will point to a desk and you will sit there for the rest of the time you are in my class ever," He extended the 'ever' making it sound like he was trying to sound evil. Looking at me, I knew what was coming. "We will start from the top of the roll and go down," he exclaimed, smiling sarcastically at me. "Jess Avery," he pointed to a desk by the door at the front. I went to sit at the desk Mr. Marshall had pointed to and I started to get out my books.
As I did so, I felt people's eyes following me. Suddenly everyone's eye sight snapped away when they heard the next name. So did mine. The name was Alexander Collis. He sat down in the chair next I me as I realised that what class he would be in did not come up when we were talking. If it had I would have gone the same way as him, because clearly he had found quicker way to class, and the quicker the better with Mr. Marshall.
"Hi," he said in that deep husky voice that made me tremble.
"H-Hi," I replied. He got out his books and we didn't talk for the rest of the boring history lesson. It droned on for what seemed like hours, when it was only really one. I fiddle with my pencil for most of the lesson and perked up every time Mr Marshall shot me a warning glance. When the bell finally went it gave me such a shock that I jolted upright and felt a warm hand on my arm.
"You okay?" asked Alexander
"Yeah I'm fine, thanks."
I was so relieved to go to science, my favourite subject. When we got inside the class we say down and waited for Mrs Melville to explain the lesson. She stood at the front of her desk holding a lightbulb in a pose that looked almost identical to that of a TV commercial lady, persuading you to buy their product. Her bright purple eyeshadow and hot pink lips were what made her my favourite teacher, she lightened up the mood with no intention to whatsoever.
"Today," she started in her shrill voice. We will be working with light.
"Um, Mrs Melville, I'm feeling sick, can I go to the nurses office?" I asked. This couldn't be happening.
"I'll go with..."
"No!" I interrupted Abby, "I need to go alone."
I walked out the door of the classroom making my way to the bathroom. I needed to figure out a plan. it had been going for too long. I needed to take back the curse that made me half vampire. Quickly.
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Yeah, another short chapter, sorry but I want to keep you guys excited for more! It is going to get exciting from here on because she is finally going on her journey that links to her vampireness powers, lol, vampireness! ;)
Okay, for the next chapter I need
5 votes and 5 comments ;)
Hope you enjoyed it and are looking forward to chapter 3!
Love and Willy Wonka Chocolate,
Mandy, xx
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Alone
RomanceJess is just your average teenage girl, but she has a secret. A secret so big only her dad knows about it. He was one too. But now he's gone. Forever. She may think. She meets a boy and falls in love. Everything goes down the drain as she goes on a...
