Hey guys, I just came across this original outline we did for All Your Fates when it was first conceived. And this is more or less what the story was supposed to be until I created Pepper by accident, and you can really tell it wouldn't have been the same without her.
Also I really laughed outloud when I read what we had originally in store for Chapter 10! Poor Hipster David, we never did cut him a break!
~C
CHAPTER ONE
Intro to David's philosophy on fate
And his charmed life
David comes across the poster
Gets the three fates emailed to him
Follows the actions
Which bring him to O. Emma
CHAPTER TWO
David gets stalky on Emma working up nerve to speak
His attempt to speak to her keeps getting derailed
Bolsters up courage
Follows Emma to Multiverse Seminar
CHAPTER THREE
First impressions of Gabriel
David making a fool of himself
Something David says, makes Emma sit up and take notice
Gabriel cuts David down to size
Humiliated he leaves
Emma follows him out
They have an awkward introduction
Agree to meet later for coffee
Emma runs into Gabriel
CHAPTER Four
David's version of chapter three's events
Chapter Five
Gabriel chides Emma for running out during his lecture
He oh so subtly persuades her to meet him
She forgets all about meeting David
Chapter Six
David waits for Emma,
realizes he has been stood up
goes to work at the studio
starts to experience for the first time: bad luck
see's it as an ominous sign
Chapter Seven
Emma meets Gabriel
Realizes at the 11th hour she had stood up David
Writes a missed craigslist connection
Chapter Eight
and confront Emma about standing him up
Chapter Nine
Emma's POV
Meets David finally,
Compares him to Gabriel
Meets Gabriel again
Unsure about either of them
Emma decides to call David
Chapter Ten
Snowball of bad luck for david
David loses his fellowship
Pisses off roommate who boots him out
Gets a call that his dog died back home
And in his grief drops his iphone into the toilet
Chapter Eleven
More Gabriel intensity
Chapter Twelve
David moves in with ex-professor Timothy Leary of sound
Thinks about his lot in life, including Emma
Starts the experiments
Chapter Thirteen
Emma tracks David down to the professor's place
Right while he's in the middle of an experiment
Emma walks into the middle of it
And they argue, while they argue David gets distracted
Something goes dreadfully wrong
Suddenly he sees Emma fragmented in a prism
ACT TWO
Timothy Leary character tries to convince David to find his way back to one reality
David, however, feels this is his only chance to get with Emma
He uses what he learns from other Emma's against herself with comedic and disastrous results – using the same cornball pick up line again and again
ONE NIGHT STAND
has a one night stand early on, then rebuffs his attentions afterwards
TAKES DAVID IN LIKE A STRAY CAT
FALLS IN LOVE-->WORLDS DESTROYED
FRIENDZONED EMMA
EMMA PRIME à ALWAYS THE NEAR MISS like Serendipity
EMMA THINKS HE IS A CRAZY STALKER
ACT THREE
Despite warnings by Timothy O'Leary character
David goes back one more time
Destroys Own world.
Becomes a refugee in Emma Prime's
Finds out she has gone back to Sweden
Is determined to find her
YOU ARE READING
All Your Fates: Bonus Chapters
RomanceI've moved the bonus chapters, rants, etc. from All Your Fates to this mini-book, so as to not interrupt the flow of the original story. So if you found a favourite bonus story missing from All Your Fates, you'll find it here. I might also add some...
