Overprotective Brother - Luis Coronel

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"Oh my fucking god, Kiara! Why would you date him?! Out of all people, you go after my fucking friend!" he clenched his fists, "and you," he pointed at Luis, "I don't want you dating my sister."

"Why you making a big deal out of this?" Luis said stepping closer to him.

"He makes me happy." I said stepping out from behind Luis and standing at his side.

"I don't give a shit if he makes you happy, I know him, he's gonna end up hurting you!" he yelled in my face.

I stepped back and Luis stepped foward.

"Bro, come on, don't be like that towards her." he says calmly laying his hand on my brother's shoulder.

"Get the fuck away from me." he then shoved Luis.

"Don't do this right now." Luis said stepping foward again.

"And what are you gonna do?" he says shoving him again.

Luis gave him a hard look and didn't budge.

"Please, stop." I begged.

"Shut the hell up!" my brother said, still staring at Luis.

"Don't talk to her like that." Luis said annoyed.

My brother then punched Luis.

It all then happened so quick.

Punches were being thrown at each other and I couldn't stop what was happening.

Luis was on top of my brother throwing punches until I grabbed Luis and pulled him off.

"Stop!" I cried holding onto Luis like my life depended on it.

Luis then hugged me and kissed me on the top of my head.

My brother got up and wiped off a little blood he had on his face.

I stood there crying in Luis' chest and Luis was just swaying us back and forth.

It was like this for about five minutes as we all calmed down.

My crying had stopped and I looked to see my brother was just staring at me and Luis.

I looked up at Luis and he kissed my nose.

I gave him a little reassuring smile and laid my head on his shoulder.

"He really does make you happy huh?" my brother asked.

I looked at him and then at Luis, "yeah he does." I said smiling at him.

Luis smiled back and kissed me.

I heard my brother sigh and walk towards us.

"Just promise you'll treat her right?" he says looking at Luis.

"I promise." he held out his hand for my brother to shake.

He grabbed his hand and shook it.

My brother then gave me a hug.

"I'm sorry, Kiara, I just didn't want you to get hurt," he says into my ear, "but seeing the way Luis is with you, I know he really does like you." he says rubbing my back.

We let go and I smile at him.

"Thank you." I said to him.

"For?" he asked.

"Being overprotective. Shows you really do care about me." I grinned.

"Of course I care." my brother smiled, "but if you hurt her," my brother says seriously, turning towards Luis, "I will hunt you down."

"Don't worry, I won't." Luis says smiling at me.

"Can we watch movies now?" I asked.

"Yeah let's watch movies." Luis kisses my forehead.


Hey guys!

I'm finally back!

For good this time lol.

I won't be busy for a while especially since summer is coming up.

So request my loves.

I'm uploading again Friday.

Love you guys.

Keep supporting Luis.


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