Hi this is my first fan fiction. I would like constructive criticism pleasee thankss xxx love MegaOneDirectionFan xxxxx

 

P.S mam if you are reading this you shouldn't be coz you promised but if you are enjoy and DONT take the mic for any soppy stuff. okay ? much love xoxoxoxox

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Emma P.O.V

My name is Emma and this is my story. My life is pretty normal. Normal house, normal family and friends, and a normal school. I live with my best friend Zoey in my house.We are both 16 only 11 days between us both in September. I have a brother, Callum and he moved out ages ago, when he was 18 and he is 23 now.My parents live abroad, where ever their job takes them. But they pay for the house and for food, stuff like that and they write to me every so often. They used to live with me untill a year back, they only come home when they can. My whole world changed one Saturday morning, over the Easter holidays, when me and Zoey was walking up to our local highstreet. We were only at the bottom of our street when suddenly five good looking boys came running around the corner.

''Ahhhhhh'' They screamed and once around the corner properly stood there to catch their breath back.

''Urmmm hi'' I said recognising them all !!!

'' Hey ... we are ....'' Harry started to say as a huge gang of girls went running past the street, the boys all ducked behind cars. ''We are One Direction'' He repeated with a smile. All the boys were sitting behind these cars still out of breath. Louis was laying on Harrys lap.

''Sometimes I hate being famous!'' Liam said standing up. ''I mean I love our fans yeah but we just wanted to have a little fun before we moved in.''

''What you're moving down here?'' Zoey asked, acting cooler than I thought she would. Liam was her favourite and Niall was mine.

''Yeah just in that street over there.'' Zayn said pointing over to a nice street that some of mine and Zoeys friends lived.

''We could show you some fun but quiet places if you wanted.'' I said looking at Niall.

''Sure, that would be great but first of all who are you both?'' He asked and grinned

''Well I'm Emma.'' I said reaching out my hand.

''Hey Emma, I'm Niall.'' He said shaking my hand. I blushed and looked down.

''And I'm Zoey.'' Who held her hand out to Liam.

He took it and shook it. ''Liam'' He grinned. Zoey blushed redder than me if thats even possible.

''I'M LOUIS CARROT TOMLINSON!!'' Louis screamed and we all laughed.

''I'm Harry the curly one and this is Zayn.'' Said Harry giving us and introduction not that they needed to.

''Vas appenin?'' Zayn chuckled.

''Just follow us we have a lovely spot by the river.'' Zoey exclaimed.

We took them by the river and there is a rock that points upwards and outwards and a long rock where Zayn say then Harry then Louis. I sat on the pointy rock an Niall came and sat by me. Zoey went and sat underneath the rock Niall and myself sat on and Liam followed her.

''We call this pride rock'' Zoey said.

''Why?''Louis asked.

''Coz the rock me and Niall is sat on looks like the one from the lion king.''

''Ohhhhhhhhhh.'' The four boys that sat on the long rock chorused.

''I dont know what you mean because I've never seen the lion king.'' said Niall.

''Well we'll defianatly have to watch it some time.''

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After a while of talking it started to rain a little. Then it started to rain a lot so we all ran back to mine and Zoey's house. We all got in and we were SOAKING.

''We are just going to put our PJ's on.'' I called. ''Just make yourselves comfy.''

Me and Zoey came back downstairs she was wearing dark purple shorts and a purple Jack Wills hoodie and I was wearing dark blue shorts and a light blue strappy top. We walked in to see the boys shivering in their soaking t-shirts.

''Ohh just take them off and I will put them on the radiator.'' I said

They did and OHMIGOD Holy Six Packs !!!! It was lush but I didnt show that I was impressed. They all sat back down and me and Zoey sat next to Niall and Liam.

''I think we should take this oppotunity to watch the lion king.'' I laughed as I got up to put it in the DVD player. I went to the kitchen to get popcorn then sat back down by Niall to watch the film.

Niall P.O.V

Wow she is gorgeous. I have only just met her but she seems wonderful !!! We are watching the Lion King, I've never seen it before. She is sitting here in her PJ's and I'm here shirtless. Cringe, coz I aint as toned as the others. Zayne has fallen asleep out of boredom and Louis is throwing popcorn at Harry who is trying to dodge it. Emma has now fallen asleep on my chest. I put my arm around her protectivly. I tried not to act bothered by this but I WAS. I loved this, it felt so right. I looked to my left to see Zoey asleep on Liams chest much the same as Emma. He put his arm around her too and put his head on hers gently. I think he likes her. I looked back down at Emma, sleeping so peacefully. I think I like Emma a lot !!! I might ask her out in the next few days, but would she say yes? Thats the thing what if she doesnt like me back. Hmmmm I'll just have to think.

Liam P.O.V

My God !!! She is BEAUTIFUL !!! I've only known her for a day, but I really want to ask her out. What if she doesnt like me ? But right now she has fallen asleep on my chest. I can feel her breath on my bear skin, it feels amazing. I've never felt like this with anyone before. I have put my arm around her and I have my head on hers. This is wonderful I could stay like this forever. Uh Oh trust Louis to ruin it by chucking popcorn at us, at the end of the film, which of course woke up Zoey.

''Hmmm'' she said sitting up.

''Umm the film has finished and its getting late so we will see you tomorrow, yeah?'' Louis said as he woke up Zayn. Harry went to get our tops. Niall woke up Emma to tell her that we were going. We all got up and went to the door. The girl hugged us all and Zoey hugged me last. I held her tight and took in her beautiful smell. Niall hugged Emma last too and seemed to be doing the same thing as me. Did he like her? But anyway we all swapped numbers and arranged to meet up at the girls house the next day. That should be fun.

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