Hello! I'm still working on When Stars Die, so any constructive criticism would be great. I may be changing parts around, adding new content, and so on, until I get it just right, so don't please don't worry. I'm working on When Stars Die as a novel, so the "chapters" are the actual chapters broken up, since it's too long. Also, please do not steal, this is my original work!! I hope you enjoy the story as much as I enjoy writing it! Thank you!
P.S.- I have some characters in this story from another planet that doesn't speak English, measures time differently, and so on. I've written it so that English-speaking people can understand it, just know when I talk about things being written in English (if it's from their perspective), it's because they speak another language!
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When Stars DieScience Fiction
Six teens. Two sides. One story. ~ Asher Agate is seventeen years old, and his planet, Earth has just been invaded. Prince Alder Winston Augustus Praeforth the Seventeenth of Magfortem is seventeen years old, and is part of the forces invading the...