Ok, so I wrote this when I was about 12 or 13, so yes, my grammar and plot line and everything SUCKS
I will be going through this and fixing everything and maybe making it a bit less cheesy. Hopefully soon but I'm really busy with school.
So yeah, I realize a lot of spelling and stuff is wrong, but again I was 12 with no story writing experience sturffs whatsoever, so please don't keep giving me negative comments.
Thanks
Daphne :)
