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©Copyright 2015-Present by A.K. Halterman. All rights reserved, including the right of reproduction on whole or in parts in any form. I own this story and all its characters. Any copying/redistributing/writing is prohibited by law and will be punished in a court of law unless you receive consent from the author.

WARNING!: Please be aware that while I do not personally condone vicious, malicious, or violent acts, there may be a lot of disturbing content throughout this story.

Warning: This is not a fluffy, sweet book about a kid in a "gang" that doesn't do anything but says that he's the leader of a gang. This contains a lot of violence. I write as realistic as possible, and the reality is that gangs are not cute, fluffy people who you would introduce to your grandma. Gangs are violent, they deal drugs, and they kill people. All of the above are in this book. If you cannot handle this, or do not believe this is morally right, then no one is forcing you to read this. Andre is a bad person; but that doesn't mean he can't change when opportunity presents itself.

Also be warned I wrote this 5 years ago, five, meaning in 2012-2013 I was writing this. That is a very long time and I have since grown as a writer. I am aware of most of the problems throughout this book, and I do plan to rewrite it. Yes, I know, this is a terrible excuse and if I don't like this I shouldn't keep it published. Thing is, some people actually do enjoy it and I know the pain of an author unpublishing books. So I'm keeping this up for the people who enjoyed it and reread. That being said I plan to rewrite it, completely.

Now, if you would like to read it and give me some constructive criticism. If you would like to give me points that you think I can improve upon, please tell me. Don't just say something like, "oh I hate this" or "this was terrible" or my personal favorite at the end of the book, "this was a terrible book and the characters were disgusting" or this, "this is toxic". Tell me why you thought it was terrible, toxic, etc so I can improve it when I rewrite it. I am open to criticism so long as it is done in a polite manner with context that I can take note of.
And no, I do not mean point out every grammatical error. I have many resources that will point out grammar mistakes. I'm talking about what you liked or didn't like about the plot, characters, flow, etc. If you didn't like something, please tell me why and how I can improve on it.

With that being said. Thank you all so much for your support.

"Nobody's all good or bad, and nobody's all light or dark. Every human being has so many different aspects and facets to them. And there can be something noble and something really dark and dangerous going on in a person all at the same time." -Anna Gunn

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