after a few hours, Melissa and her mother are going to a Christmas party
Charlie Bucket: have fun girls
Melissa Bucket: we will dad
Veruca Salt: are you sure you don't want to come?
Charlie Bucket: yes...
Veruca Salt: ok love
Melissa and her mom goes into the glass elevator and fly away
Charlie Bucket: well, guess I now have some free time
suddenly he hears a knock at the factory doors
Charlie Bucket: who is it?
charlie looks at the camera and sees someone dressed as the unknown killer
Charlie Bucket: ha ha ha very funny
they don't move
Charlie Bucket: ok, you can leave now
they stay there
Charlie Bucket: ok, I'm calling the cops
they leave
Charlie Bucket: finally...
suddenly Charlie hears glass breaking
Charlie Bucket: oh no
as Charlie turns around he sees the killer, with a knife
Charlie Bucket: so you want to kill me? well guess what, i'v been preparing for this since I was 11 years old
charlie and the killer starts fighting, but the killer over powers him, stabbing him to death
a few hours later, melissa and veruca get back
Veruca Salt: honey we're home, honey...Charlie?
Melissa Bucket: dad where are...
Melissa sees her dad dead
Melissa Bucket: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Totally Unknown (charlie and the chocolate factory meets totally killer fanfic)
Fanfictionthis story is basically totally killer but with willy Wonka characters after Melissa bucket saw her dad, Charlie bucket, get killed in front of her by "the unknown killer" she unintentionally goes back in time to 2005, where she meets a younger ver...