First Date | Luis Coronel

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I walked into my new school with my head down not wanting any attention. I picked my head up once or twice to see where I'm going. As I'm trying to find my class, I bumped into someone causing me to crash onto the floor.

"Great." I muttered.

"I'm sorry, are you okay?" The person said.

I looked up to see a cute guy in front of me.

"I-uh-" I stuttered. Way to go (Y/N).

"Here let me help you." He held his hand out for me.

I grabbed his hand and got up.

"Thank you." I mumbled.

"You're welcome. Are you new here?" He asked.

"Yeah.. I'm trying to look for my class." I said looking down.

"Let me see your schedule." He held his hand out.

I handed him my schedule and he looked at it for a second.

"Well (Y/N), my name is Luis. And we pretty much got every class together so come with me beautiful." He bobbed his head, indicating for me to follow.

I blushed when he called me beautiful but quickly shook it off.

"So are you new to this town too?" He asked.

"Yeah." I replied.

"Maybe I can show you around. So you can get to know the place a little better." He smiled.

"So like a date?" I asked quickly regretting what I said. "I mean not uh- a date I meant f-friendly d-date." I said nervously.

He gave a weird look and started chuckling.
"You're cute when you're nervous. But sure. Let's call it a date. I'll meet you tonight at your house. Text me your address." He said grabbing a pen out of his pocket and writing his number down on my hand.

"I'll make sure too." I smiled at him.


Later that day.

I sat in my bedroom and waited for Luis to arrive. I had got to know him better at school and he's a real gentleman.

"(Y/N)! A guy named Luis is here to pick you up!" My mom yelled from downstairs.

I walked downstairs and saw him standing at the door with a rose, smiling.

I walked up to him and he handed me the rose.

"You look absolutely gorgeous." He smiled.

"Thank you, you look handsome."

"Thank you chula." He blushed. "Shall we get going?" He asked as he opened the door.

"We shall." I smiled as I walked out the door.

He also opened the car door for me and I couldn't help but like him even more. He was an absolute gentleman and I just couldn't get enough of him.

"So where are we going?" I asked curious as he got into the car and started it up.

"Um.. that's a surprise." He winked at me.

He started driving and for what seemed like forever, we finally had arrived.

I looked out the car door window to see where we were.

We we're at the beach. I looked at it in awe.

There was candles, and a little picnic.

"Luis, this is so beautiful. You did this all for me? But we just met." I looked at him.

"I know we just met corazon. But to be honest, I feel like I've known you for forever. I really like you (Y/N)." He leaned in and kissed my cheek.

He grabbed my hand and led me to the picnic. He grabbed the blanket and laid it out so we could sit. I sat as so did he.

"So what did you bring?" I asked wanting food already.

"I bought chocolate covered strawberries, watermelon, some cookies," he paused and winked, "and sandwiches with juice boxes."

I giggled when he said juice boxes because that was adorable.

He handed me a sandwich and took a bite out of his. I took a bite also.

"You really know how to make sandwiches." I grinned.

"Thank you." He nodded.

After we ate, we walked on the beach where it was absolutely beautiful.

"This is so beautiful." I looked at the beach.

"Yeah, I come here to think sometimes." Luis said looking down at the water.

I looked over at him. He noticed I was staring and looked at me.

"What?" He asked.

"Nothing." I smiled.

He chuckled. "We should get going."

I pouted. "Okay, let's go." I said not wanting too.

We got into the car and he drove me home.

When we got to my house, being the gentleman he is, he got off and opened the car door for me.

I got off and he walked me to the door.

"I had a really great time." I looked into his eyes.

"I did too." He smiled widely.

"Well.." I started off.

He then started to lean in. I leaned it too knowing where this was going.

When he lips touched mine, I couldn't help but feel sparks. I felt butterflies in my stomach.

Our lips moved in sync as he hands wrapped around my waist. My arms swooped over his shoulders.

We both pulled back and his forehead rested on mine.

"I'll see you tomorrow baby girl." He smiled.

My heart fluttered when he called me baby girl.

"Okay." I kissed his cheek and he hugged me. I hugged him back and let go.

"Bye mi amor." He said as he walked to his car.

"Bye handsome" I called back.

Best day ever.


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