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“Wake up!!” I heard someone say harshly. I felt cold water spill onto my face, making me choke as it fell into my open mouth.
“Get up, brat!”
I coughed and blinked, trying to clear the water from my eyes. I raised my hands to wipe my eyes and found that they were shackled together. The smoke and steam in the air made it hard to breathe.
“What?” I thought.
“Ellie!! Are you ok babe??” I heard Ryan think.
“I think so. Where are you? Where are we?”
He answered with a word that told me all I needed to know.
“Yeah. Are you hurt?”
”Not that I can tell. I’m in a room that looks like the cavern, but smaller and its glowing red.”
“I’m in the same kind of room.”
“Open your eyes, brat!”
“W-where am I?” I asked aloud. My throat was hoarse from the smoke.
“You’ll find out in time.” I wiped my eyes and looked around. There was an old lady standing next to me, wearing a ratty dress and an apron. Strange.
“On your feet princess, he wants to see you.”
“Who?” I asked, playing dumb.
“Baylan of course!” She grabbed my elbow and yanked me from the stone slab I had been laying on. “This way!” She ordered. Her voice reminded me of broken glass put through a blender.
“Ryan! She’s taking me to him!”
“Calm down babe, I’ll get to you as son as I can. There’s someone coming to my room, I think they may be bringing me with you.”
I marched down a long hallway, up a few flights of stairs, and down another hallway. I heard footsteps behind me and turned to see Ryan being prodded behind me.
He looked up and smiled quickly before the guard saw him.
“I’m right behind you.”
We ended up at a large set of red doors set into the stone., they opened, and revealed a black marble throne room. At the far end sat Baylan, in a red marble throne.
“He certainly goes for the clichés and the dramatics, doesn’t he?” I thought to Ryan.
“No kidding. I think I saw this in a movie set once…”
“Ahh, Princess Elandra! How good of you to join us!” Baylan announced loudly. He wore a long, deep red velvet cape.
“Yep. Definitely in a movie at least once.” I thought.
“What do you want with us?” I demanded.
“Oh, not very polite. You’re not even going to say hello?”
I just stared.
“Very well then. It’s quite simple.”
“Let me guess, you’re going to hold us hostage and try to take over the kingdom, then the world, right?” Ryan said sarcastically, rolling his eyes.
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The Magical Transformation of An Ice PrincessTeen Fiction
A teenage girl is followed by a young man, before he shows up as a new student in her high school. He approaches her at lunch, and tells her a secret that will change both of their lives, and the lives of hundreds more. The term "ice princess" does...