Teen Fiction Reviews by Laly13 Vol. 2

review #120: Tempestuous

author: sprinkleofhayat

read it if: you like mystery

plot:

Seventeen-year-old Fallon Nikolas' life is at risk simply because she was at the wrong place at the wrong time.

But who knew she would find herself in so much trouble after attending her best friend's funeral?

review:

There isn't a lot of chapters yet, but there's enough mystery to start conspiracy theories\hypotesis while updates are made, so if you're a massive fan of teen mystery, then this could be the book for you

The only catch is that you have to read carefully, because the chapters are so long and full of details that if you jump-read you may get a little lost eventually

All in all, if you're a patient mystery junkie consider this book to take a space in your library

note to author:

if you're reading this, thanks for making this. I'll do a mini begging for more updates, because slow updates and cliffhangers on mystery books are a huge pain in everybody's asses hehe. And a little recommendation: make the chapters shorter. The mystery is kind of jumbling itself (not because of the writing, but because of the situation)and not everybody pays attention to every word(I'm a jump-reader myself). Keep writing and take care ;)

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