Enemies With Benefits*

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Enemies With Benefits 

by xosa29

I am already obsessed with this story, part is because I have obsession issues for everything but the other part is that this plot is really good. I do wish the chapters were longer, but that is just because I want to read more. Now I don't want you to confuse this review with the other Enemies With Benefits story. When you search Enemies With Benefits on Wattpad it is the second one down. I read the first one that came up, apparently it used to be 'I Met Him In The Shower' and I don't really have a nice review for that one, but I don't want to trash anyones story either. It's just I don't think ever get published. That is all I am going to say on that one. So if you want to read the good one, make sure you get the right author: xosa29.

This one just says 'Up 4 Watty Awards', so I didn't even check if it was on What's Hot. I am sure it has been, I just didn't check for sure.

Anyway... I love the story because the characters are really consistent. The story line isn't rushed, but it isn't too boring either. The relationship with the two main character, Gavin and Penelope (love the name) is like a rollercoaster. One day they're at each others throats, the next they are making out in her apartment. Which I guess when you have two young and hot people, that it is probably how it would go down.

Plus, the twist with Ethan and the scary stalker guy was.... I don't know how to explain it. It was awesome. Not that I'D want a scary stalker guy almost kidnap me, but that it wasn't what you expected it to be. You would have never expected, the way the story was going, for it to happen. Which again... It was awesome. By the way if you haven't read it, I might have just spoiled it for you, but really I don't even know what is going to happen yet.

I literally, from when I started writing this review, JUST read the most recent upload! It is a cliffhanger, and I am desperate for the next upload!

Oh yeah, 10 out of 10 stars. I am almost as obsessed with this story as 'Tame My Heart!'

[I feel really dumb writing one of these considering this isn't a real story, but a review. Yet I am writing one anyway. I am not going to be the cliche in all of this and say: VOTE, COMMENT, AND FAN ME! No I am not going to say that. If you don't want to, don't. Just saying I would love it if you do. I love to read feedback on what you think of the stories I review. Even rate the story yourself, if you'd like to. I would find that really interesting.

Also the next upload with be on one of my readers stories, whether if it is on What's Hot or not (that rhymes). If it is under 20 parts, I will read it. Vote if I like it (on every chapter). And post it to all my fans to read it also (which is like 12 fans so it isn't really much, yet still appreciated). I can't read everyones, I have a life. That is why I said if it is under 20 parts I WOULD read it, it would take me forever to read everyones story that is 59 parts long.

God that would give me a massive headache!

But if you are interested in recommending your story, just post it in the comments! I wouldn't write a nasty review, the review would go to a story I really like. So if it is my next review, don't be stressed, it'll be nice. I don't go and troll on the internet!]

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