*Cracks fingers* Alright, I'm gonna rewrite this character so good that you'll admit that I can write characters better than Ken Penders. Scratch that, I am better than Penders at EVERYTHING IN GENERAL, and I'm a friggin teenager. You call it being overconfident, I call it the truth.
What I know:
Julie-Su is a descendant of Dimitri (AKA Enerjak the III) and a distant relative of Knuckles and his girlfriend. And people keep complaining about the Knuxikal ship because their "distant relatives". She's also a former member of the Dark Legion, led by her evil half-siblings, Lien-Da and Kragok, and is pretty handy on firearms. Alright, rewrite:
Backstory:
Julie-Su Mallory (Real last name Loi) is the latest descendant of the House of Dimitri and the first of many generations to bare the power of Enerjak. She is a born daughter of the Nocturnus clan's Dark Legion army, from the Grandmaster Luger Teivel and his second wife Marie-Su Loi, the half-younger sister of Lien-Da and Kragok Teivel and distant cousin of Nakbé "Dreads" Mace.
Ever since she was little, she always had a troubled life due to her half-siblings being against their father's remarriage and became even more jealous when the family found out she had the power of their ancestor Dimitri, the third Enerjak, making her the next in line of Grandmaster of Nocturne and possibly the next Enerjak.
After the Teivel Twins caused the "accident" that took her mother's life, they left her to die where she was found by Dark Legionnaires Simon and Floren-Ca Mallory, but not before using her for the test of Noctune's Memory Neutralizing Headset prototype and erase her memories for good measure.
After eight years (Twilight Cage time) of being raised in a lovely environment, she was playing hide and seek with her foster parents and accidentally rediscovered the room where she got her memories neutralized, in which she saw the headset being forced on the Nocturne Princess, to the point that she didn't even remember her own name. With her memories almost instantly returning to her, a terrified Julie-Su attempted to escape, only to be tased by Lien-Da and lose her memory again.
She eventually became a support trooper at the age of 13, training nonstop due to constantly being monitored by the current grandmaster and his second in command, to the point of almost looking like a robot when she performs her duties and training, until she became the Tribune of the Nocturnus Clan at 16, while also having a familiar sensation with the new Procurator Shade.
Working by the force of Shade's mentor and former procurator, Dusk, the two were able to create a warp belt, albeit it was rushed and can only temporarily let the clan escape from the Twilight Cage, contrary from what the angriest echidna of the Zone wanted, but Julie assured that the science team will find a more permanent solution, thus saving Shade from her wrath and starting a bond with the young echidna.
When the Procurators teleport to Angel Island, they are greeted by its protectors, who proceed to fight them all off, but Shade takes care of both of them with ease while giving Julie-Su time to escape and find the Master Emerald. After some time, she eventually does find it along with the Guardian, who senses a familial feeling when she sees him. She is quickly noticed and attacked, with the Guardian eventually gaining the upper hand and pinning her to the ground, unmasking her, and almost instantly senses the familial feeling when they locked eyes.
Taking the opportunity, she punches the Guardian in the face with her robotic arm and retreats back to the Twilight Cage with the other procurators, while the Guardian's mentor Archimedes suspects they've made Familial Touch, a spell that gives the user a familial sensation when first meeting a distant relative.
Since then, Julie-Su would meet Dreads in secrecy due to feeling something familiar about him, and slowly forming an unbreakable bond with him and the other protectors, feeling at home at the beautiful heaven that is Angel Island, and suspecting that the Nocturnus Clan want something more than to just escape the cage, she tries to do all in her power to retrace the footsteps of her past and prevent them from taking control of the Island and it's magic.
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Sonic characters rewrite
RandomThis story is gonna be a rewrite of hated Sonic characters for my project. What else? Don't be afraid to type down which character you want me to rewrite.
