Chapter 12: Feeling Pinkie Keen

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The sun shined on yet another day at Ponyville as we start things off on a hillside in Ponyville where you, Twilight, and Spike were. You were a few feet away watching while Twilight was situated about five feet away from Spike who stood in a pose while wearing a necklace made from leaves. He also had a rock on his head and held a stick in his claw as if it were a cane. Twilight, meanwhile, was aiming her glowing horn at Spike in an attempt to try out a new spell.

At first, it seems to work as the necklace around Spike's neck poofs into a fancy tuxedo before the stick transforms into a cane as well. Right after that however, Spike was distracted for a second by something offscreen and Twilight gets his attention back.

Twilight Sparkle: Eyes over here, Spike!

Spike: Uh, sorry.

He apologized, looking back and posing for Twilight again.

(P/N): Before you continue, I just need to quickly ask something. Why exactly does this spell require concentration from the both of you again? I mean, I can understand it from your end, Twilight, but why does Spike need to concentrate as well?

Twilight Sparkle: This spell was made so that both parties need to be in sync with each other in order for the spell to fully work. If one individual loses focus, then the other loses focus as well.

Her explanation made one of your eyebrows raise.

(P/N): That... seems needlessly complicated.

Twilight Sparkle: Well, I'm not the one who made the spell, so it's not like I can change how it works.

She focuses back on Spike as she now works to change the stone on his head into that of a tophat which she does rather perfectly, at least at first.

Twilight Sparkle: For this spell to work, it's crucial we keep our concentration totally on the-

???: Ooh!

A familiar high pitched voice is heard elsewhere as Spike looked in the direction it came from only for the tophat above his head to change back into a rock as it came down, but you were quick to step in and smack the stone away just before it could hit him.

(P/N): That was a close one! You alright, little bud?

He breathes a sigh of relief and gives you a thumbs up.

Spike: Yeah, I am. Thanks for the save, P/N.

(V/N): Aw, come on! We could have witnessed something totally hilarious and you ruined it!

(P/N): *thinking* It also could have left Spike with a serious concussion.

(V/N): Uh, yeah! That's the point of comedy, ain't it? The essence of comedy comes from misery.

(P/N): *thinking* To a point, but there's a limit to it, you know.

(V/N): Limit, schmimit! It would have been funny to see and you know it.

Twilight berating Spike then gained your attention.

Twilight Sparkle: Spike! This magic needs our full attention to make it happen. There's no other way!

Spike: I can't help it. Look!

He points elsewhere as you followed where his claw directed only to be greeted by the sight of Pinkie, but something seemed off about her, at least more off than usual. She wore an umbrella hat while strangely darting around town and looking up at the sky as if something was gonna fall on her.

Twilight Sparkle: Ugh, never mind her. She's just being Pinkie Pie.

Spike: Super-extra Pinkie Pie today.

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⏰ Last updated: Dec 17, 2022 ⏰

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