your betrayal

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Betrayal felt like a bullet ricochet into my shoulder blade.
Your lies stung.
Your commitment meant nothing.
You were oblivious to everything,, while I was obvious.

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everyone had been stabbed in the back at one point in their lives, so i expressed my opinion through paper and pencil and this turned out amazingly. my teacher loved this one so much. even some people that i have shared this with think that it's very outspoken and well written.

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