Rewriting: Silver the Hedgehog

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Alright, before you go hate on me, I see the reasons why people hate Cinnamon roll, but I don't hate him for it! But, I'll make some stuff more understanding for him:

Why is he hated:
He is unbearably naive, is always making things more complicated for Sonic and Elise, his story is practically completely useless and do I have to be reminded about the constant "ITS NO USE" cahchfrase? Every time I hear it, I remember him. You guys are making him look like a bad character. Oh, and he speaks nonsense (to the people who haven't played his story yet at least).
Alright, Rewrite:

Backstory:
Venice Dellune-Solare is the only half-hedgehog of the Dellune Immigrants who was born with little to no powers, so he could only use his gauntlets to give him artificial psychokinetic abilities until his true power awakens. He is raised by his older stepsister Gold Dellune-Solare, the psychic messenger receiver and transmitter and Mammoth Ixis Mogul, the immigrants headmaster, along with the Solar Kingdom Princess Flame Soleil, his love interest.

Venice has spent most of his life under the careful watch of timid Gold requested by Mogul, and she did everything to be the best sister she could be to him, by teaching him to control his artificial powers by playing multiple board games and teaching him how to use his mind as a power. She also taught him how to use his gauntlets to make an artificial DJ set by using his mind, taught him freestyle dance, sing and even yoga practices to make him flexible.

Although her efforts to give him a good life, the fact that Iblis is making fewer and fewer of the survivors makes him wanna destroy it permanently, but like the others, he'd have a physical weakness due to being born from a flaming world: he has a very sensitive stomach and he will get nauseous from time to time.

While the years past, everybody gave up hope, except him and Gold. She was filled with hope that one day, the world will change back to its original days, and gave the same hope to him. When he got older, he got more and more determined because he was always made fun of because he was the only one who's powers didn't awaken yet, but Mogul didn't give up hope, thanks to Gold predicting about a prophecy: "The Sealing of a flame will trigger anew."

When he and Flame were 14, the Dellune Immigrants along with the Solar Kingdom were attacked by Iblis in the Soleanna ruins while trying to immigrate to another place while  he was searching for souvenirs, Gold messaged Flame to get help with her telepathy, and eventually succeeded in calling for help in his mind when she was able to contact him.
After defeating Iblis, and getting frustrated because they can never truly defeated it. Then Mephiles, a masked half-hedgehog artist appears, claiming to have known why and when it happened, and tells that responsible is a being known as the Iblis Ignitor, making Flame suspicious of him on if he knew about this then why didn't he do something about it then and why now, but when he reveals he made a family of his own, her suspicions slightly go down, but not enough to make her feel like something's wrong.

After the group teleported to the exact moment the Chaos Control Incident occurred, Venice just went straightforward to the light that was slowly consuming the people trying to escape it, while Flame went after him.
After that, he was teleported in the forest of Soleanna, but he had different appearance: his hair was down and in a silver white, his eyes were golden yellow, and he had actual powers (he figured it out as soon as he freaked out when he saw himself in a river reflection). Eventually going by the name of Silver, Venice ventures the Soleanna kingdom with Amelia Rose and learns about the simple wonders people usually don't take notice, while searching for Flame, Mephiles and his family, and the Iblis Ignitor.

Personality:
Silver is naive and childish at times, but quite responsible and serious when it comes to saving the future. I've also learned that he is boisterous and rude at times, to my disbelief. So I've decided to do some changes for better:

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