My life at its worst

chapter one

hey guys please vote/comment all tips welcome im new to writing stories so any advise would be helpfull. I thought that you might want to see the characters so far...

My stomach flipped as i sat in the cab listening to Amy McDonald, this is the life. it was my favorite song but my mind went blank i usually had no trouble following the words but i guess i was nervous as hell. The cab pulled over into a street full of posh 1st class homes. There was no way megan could live here my parents said she ran away frrom home at age 14 with a filthy scum she knew as a boyfiend, she cant egsactly be rolling in the doe now can she?

I payed the cab driver and just starred at the double door twicw as tall as me, moving my hand shakily towards the bell pinkie pushed forward and a loud chime loud enough to wake the dead or at least the people in the house ringed up my spine.and the door swung open ...

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hey guys please vote/comment all tips welcome im new to writing stories so any advise would be helpfull. I thought that you might want to see the characters so far...

My stomach flipped as i sat in the cab listening to Amy McDonald, this is the life. it was my favorite song but my mind went blank i usually had no trouble following the words but i guess i was nervous as hell. The cab pulled over into a street full of posh 1st class homes. There was no way megan could live here my parents said she ran away frrom home at age 14 with a filthy scum she knew as a boyfiend, she cant egsactly be rolling in the doe now can she?

I payed the cab driver and just starred at the double door twicw as tall as me, moving my hand shakily towards the bell pinkie pushed forward and a loud chime loud enough to wake the dead or at least the people in the house ringed up my spine.and the door swung open ...