Unfortunately, our judge yamalama has not submitted any review (within the allotted time period).
on behalf of judge @yamalama, who was accidently sorted to judge in the same category as their own book, Liz (just Liz) judged their book.
Child of Night-a feysand story by Yamalama- judged by liz
[12/12 chapters read]
Cover 3.5/5
Title 5/5
Summary 4/5
First line/paragraph 8/10
Plot 25/30
Characterization 2.5/5
Writing style 15/20
Grammar 10/20
Total 73/100
I think that this story had a lot of potential.
the cover and title fit the work well. and the first paragraph really set the scene and drew you in. The way things were described was very professional and could quite literally transport you to the world you were reading about! the plot was well thought out and carried the story forward well. However, the dialogue felt rushed, or confusing due to spelling. I think that if you took a bit more time to focus on pacing the dialogue more, it would really make your work stand out!
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