School Assignment

Ok people i wonting some feedback on this 4 school.

im in yr 9 right n 4 english we had 2 read The Outsider, n then 4 our choosh thing right something i choosh 2 right a short story of 'When Lables become Prisons' so i was wondering if this was any gd???

what it is is a new teacher/princible and hes gonna do something on the first day, possibnly what i say or something else. enjoy n plz coment.

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5 Years earlier

New Year,

New Day,

New Life,

New Job!

I had walked into that school as if I already owned the

place but truth be told I didn’t, well not yet; that’s why I'm here so I can get

the job as the principle.

I was aware of the stares of the students as I passed,

mostly the girls. They were staring at me lustfully, boy don’t I hate that,

cause’ come on I'm not that ‘hot’ as they say. Yes I’ll admit I'm not ugly, not

with my chin length brown hair, blue eyes, my high cheek bones … well you get

the point I'm saying I'm not ugly.

Now back to before, I was walking through the halls when a

girl around 16 walks out she look like your average teenage girl – desperate for

attention from the male population, she probably thinks she'd have a chance with

a teacher like me, but no. those low cut tops 5 sizes too small, and a skirt

made for a 6 year old defiantly don’t faze me. 

“Hi Sir. I'm Laura. Can I help you?” she says smiling.

“Uh no. I'm fine, and shouldn’t you be getting ready for

your classes?” I say frowning slightly.

“oh no sir you see I don’t want to go to class if I can be

with you.” She says trying to step closer.

“Miss I'm afraid you have the wrong guy please just go and annoy

your boyfriend.”

“Sir I'm afraid I can’t do that” she says stepping closer. I

step back. She looks mad. “Sir Do you know who I am? My dad happens to…” she

starts I cut her off, I’d heard it before, ‘My Dads the president’ Lie, ‘My dad

owns this school’ True ‘my dad is a multi-millionaire’ False, but I know who

her dad is I met him this morning.

“Your dads the mayor of this town isn’t he?” I ask she nods

a smile on her face, “you think you own this school because of that don’t you? Well

let me tell you something Miss. Your dad may be the mayor but you ant so that

means you can’t demand things off people. So please before I have to do

something with you, something you won’t like, I would stop acting that way.” I then

moved around her and continued on my way to the office.

Before I go in I turn and look at here and say, “miss my

wife is the one who is in charge of your daddy, so I’d be good if I were you.” I

then turned and went in the office to get my paperwork.

I didn’t realise that that was the day that my whole life

changed. I should not have said anything turns out that her uncle was the President;

boy the trouble I got at that school from the students, even some of the

teacher’s believed it.

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Ok u probs guessed what he does (: but u nevr know he could do something else well thats what i need help with i also have another idea similar but its a students thing (: ohh welll plz comment me with ideas

<3 ya

Shelley