Status: Just edited chapter 1 and 4 :) (1 year ago)

zaidman1

Name	Boyyoudontknow
Location	Right here
Member Since	Jun 14, 2011
Votes Received	207
Profile Page

As everyone here I love to write and read books. Writing has become an addiction for me.
My favourite books are the Harry Potter and Percy Jackson books. They inspire my stories.
Beside books I also like movies, tv, games and many other things a teenage guy normally likes.

I would be really glad if you fanned me or voted on my stories. Also feedback on what I do right/wrong will be appreciated :)

Works

Adrian Langer and the war of Aaton

13 parts / 45 pages, updated Jan 25, 2012 PG-13

Adrian Langer was a normal boy until his father dies in an unexplainable event. One day he gets a note which changes his life. He is informed by aliens t... read more

3,653 reads

189

261

Captain Jack Sparrow - The hourglass

2 pages, updated Jun 27, 2011 PG-13

Jack Sparrow is on a quest to find the hourglass which will help him bring back his Pearl. Everything goes wrong when a pirate named Caff tries to mess with Jack. Short story featuring characters like : Jack Sparrow and Gibbs.

746 reads

zaidman1's Reading List

Second Chance At Life

3,133 reads

The White Rosebush

69,076 reads

Eloquence

2,059 reads

The Life and Times of Severus Snape

663 reads

Message Board

zaidman1
1 year ago

@nihcelpud@circlesnsquares Thank you very much and I am happy you both like it :D

circlesnsquares
1 year ago

"Adrian Langer and the war of aaton"-
Firstly, this story -i thought, personally- was really good and very compelling. The way you wrote the story and made sure to not have too many mistakes was almost as good as the actual plot. I can see this story becoming popular -a rare thing at the moment- and so urge you to continue. One problem would have to be the title. I personally think that it is too long, War of Aaton would probably be better. Saying "Adrian Langer and the War of Aaton" tells me several things about your story without me needing to read it. It tells me an important characters name, the place, and that there will be a war or has been a war.
Honestly this story is great and l think it could be a sucess.
~Circlesnsquares + Tayla

nihcelpud
1 year ago

I am done critiquing Adrian Langer. Your writing is very effective and the imagery is great. I think you have a lot of potential. The plot is interesting and as long as you keep it that way, nothing else matters much. The trick is keeping it interesting. Don't give away the plot secrets all at once and throw in some twists as well. Best of luck!

feeWrites
1 year ago

@zaidman1 It's my pleasure and YAAAAY for chapter 13, lol! Looking forward to it. :)

zaidman1
1 year ago

@xXwrite2smileXx Thanx 4 ur comments on my story and its completely alright that u haven't read so often. I myself haven't been on wattpad a while. Again thank you for saying such nice things :D It is nice to be appreciated and I will be posting chapter 13 in a week maybe its just taking time to finish it ;)

feeWrites
1 year ago

Just finished catching up on Adrian Langer and the War of Aaton. Brilliant! Ignore what I said about voting problems, tho, I figured out that I just need to disconnect from my facebook account. :P And thanks for being so patient with me. I know it must seem like I've neglected your story, but it really is one of my favorites and I hope you'll update soon! =D

millypuppy01
1 year ago

Hi!:) Thanks got fanning!:)

zaidman1
1 year ago

Hello, just posted chapter. 12 of "Adrian Langer and the war of Aaton." I will appreciate it if you check it out :)

puppluv
1 year ago

Hey! Thank for fanning me! I really appreciate it and I'm glad I could help with your story :)

BubbleBathTiger...
1 year ago

Thanks for fanning!!!

show more (24)

Followers (25)

Following (17)

zaidman1

Works

Adrian Langer and the war of Aaton

Captain Jack Sparrow - The hourglass

zaidman1's Reading List

Message Board

Dedications

Recent Votes

Recent Comments