Status: Chapter 5! (3 months ago)


Name Paul
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I wrote the previous profile a year ago. I'll update this at some point.


Second Life

Second Life

6 parts / 29 pages, updated Jan 14, 2014PG
His spirit hovered over his motionless body, a tangled swirl of glowing green mist and acrid gray smoke. The Spirit Weaver knew she didn't have much time. Soon his spirit wou... read more
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Thanks! I was so worried it was cliche and a little bit worthless, but if you got something out of it that means I did something right! :)
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Weird spacing, sorry.
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Thanks for the comment. I'm trying to make the narrator a little bit playful and editorial, but it's difficult to know what's too much. There's a...
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Pretty good start! I like starting in the middle of things and introducing mystery early on (through the cloaked figure). You also do a good job...
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Let me know what you think, invisible readers
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