I'd sincerely appreciate your feedback/comments/criticism on my story. It's a Fantasy that is only eight chapters now, but i will upload more soon......
Terrilor has been at peace for ages. Wealth has been acquired and lost. Friendships have been made and broken. Despite all these things though, order has reigned eternal. But this seemingly endless peace is shaken to its very core when a mysterious cult arises from the very earth. Varkanah needs blood. Only the sacrifices of countless people will sate his enormous blood-lust. Saeran Randsly, an average man living in Rosehollow Village, seeks revenge when the cult mercilessly slaughters his family, especially his uncle William.
Why would this cult choose to sacrifice William in specific? Will Saeran get his revenge? Will Terrilor be lost under the dominion of Varkanah? Find out in "A Sacrifice for Varkanah"
The fifth chapter is up...have fun and tell me what you think!
I am extremely sorry for not writing all this time...i have been so busy i couldn't find the time to upload but its winter break! I have the next chapter ready and its gonna be posted really soon...and the chapter after that is almost done!
Sorry again to anyone whos kind enough to check my story out!!
I have uploaded the 4th chapter...check it out and tell me what you think!! Voting wont hurt :P
Hey there. I am writing a story titled "A White Arachnea"
It is about a suicidal, schizophrenic albino woman who is battling between love and death. Please read, vote and comment. Thanks!
p.s. i will read yours if you read mine. just comment on it and i will be sure to do so.
hey can you read Enlighten Me you dont have to comment or vote I just want you to read please : )
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