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xColdHeartedx

Name xColdHeartedx
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Member Since Oct 05, 2011
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Hi! I am currently offering critiques for stories in any genre, just as long as it’s not Horror or Terror or Thriller and I have no chapter maximum that I will critique. Depending on the content of your story, my critique length will vary, though I do best to make them as helpful as I can.

PAYMENT: In return, I ask you to do the same on my story. However many chapters you would like done on yours, please do to one of my stories (not poems or the character interviews). 
Please do this FIRST, before I write your critique, as it’s frustrating when people choose to ignore this part.

ALSO: Please don't give me sugary comments that aren't helpful; remember I am looking for critiques, too. (:

Please fill out the following and PM it to me:

• Title:

• Link:

• How many chapters do you want critiqued?:

• Is the payment complete?

If you actually read this whole post, then thank you.

xoxo

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"Be more concerned with your character than with your reputation. Your character is what you really are, while your reputation is merely what others think you are." 
~John Wooden

“There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside you.”
~Maya Angelou
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'MY WORKS' IS COPYRIGHTED UNDER THE COPYRIGHT ACT 1968 (CTH). THIS INCLUDES ALL CHAPTERS, PROLOGUES/EPILOGUES AND ASSOCIATED CONTENT (i.e. FANFICS, TEASERS AND CONTENT WITHIN BLOGS, SOCIAL NETWORKS AND EREADERS). ANY UNAUTHORIZED COPYING, BROADCASTING, MANIPULATION, DISTRIBUTION OR SELLING OF THIS WORK CONSTITUTES AS AN INFRINGEMENT OF COPYRIGHT. ANY INFRINGEMENT OF THIS COPYRIGHT IS PUNISHABLE BY LAW. Copyright © 2011 Kassie Dakh 

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Works

Her Silent Melody

Her Silent Melody

4 parts / 3 pages, updated Sep 14, 2013PG-13Pictures
Charlene Millington is a princess like no other. No she doesn't have powers, no she isn't a ninja assassin undercover as a princess. She's...an...not a lady. Her parents ... read more
1,887 reads votes 228 comments 56
13 Letters to Cupid

13 Letters to Cupid

7 parts / 9 pages, updated Apr 09, 2013PG-13Video
Eleanor never wanted to leave the peaceful, carefree home she knew. But moving in with her ill minded sister caused her to realise her true passion; matchmaking. When ... read more
12,737 reads votes 464 comments 112
Character Interviews!!

Character Interviews!!

4 parts / 3 pages, updated Feb 08, 2012PG-13
*You'll have to read my other stories to read this because it's mainly about my story characters, and if you've never read my stories and just want a laugh, I guess yo... read more
598 reads votes 50 comments 24
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