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Hey everyone! I’m new (and completely lost) on Wattpad and since I’m terrible at introducing myself and don’t want to waste your time and bore you, I’ll just skip to what really matters… I just submitted the first chapter of my story: The Weight of Things. And yeah, I know the tittle sucks, but please give a chance to this poor newcomer… *pouting*. Come on! You’ve been there once… Here is the description in case you’re too lazy to scroll down and click on the cover: (NOW YOU CAN’T ESCAPE, YOU’LL HAVE TO READ THE DESCRIPTION ANYWAY!!! *evil laugh*) Sisters Hester and Lenora Ferrer have longtime ago moved to the unstoppable New York City, turning their backs on childhood memories from hometown Louisiana and building a new life above their family misfortunes. While the youngest and prodigy girl, Lenora, is imprisoned and causing trouble in a preppy boarding school; the eldest, Hester, is struggling against the fact she can be discarded anytime soon, working in the predatory industry of modeling. But when the sisters travel to their grandmother’s house back in Louisiana and open the old familiar trunk in the basement, those problems seem out of scale when they are forced to face memories and unanswered questions from their past. Their past that they had tried their best to forget… And… I have to warn you guys (in case you have not noticed yet) that I’m not a native English-speaker; therefore, please forgive me for eventual spelling and grammar mistakes. And about that… if there are any grammar nazis out there (which I bet there are since this is a place for aspiring writers), please feel free to correct me so I can edit later! I guess that's all I have to say for now...
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hey i made a decision on my story and redid the openign of the first one so there is a lot more about Bo in it, let me know what you think! :) I'm taking a look at your new chapter! :)
Hey!!! New chapter of The Weight of Things! And new characters! Please tell me what you think of it, some feedback would be really apreciated! :)
@anna_aaron Sure! :)
Hi, you commented on my story coinholder and after i had a few constructive critiques i've changed the opening, same story just tried to take the advice i got. it's only one page so far but i'd be reallllly greatful if you'd take a read and let me know if you think it's a better start than my previous attempt. :D http://www.wattpad.com/5946850-coinholder-different-opening?d=ud
@CrookedCondor hello! thanks for fanning me btw :)
Ello wasp!
Hey! The King of the Box got me to fan you! It's a great short story!
Thanks so much for fanning! :D What got you to fan? And I hope you enjoy wattpad :)
@WildRose393 you're welcome! :) Your story got me by the cover, then I got even more curious by the description!
Hey there! I want to thank you for adding my story to one of your reading lists xD