Status: I right storys really good :) (1 year ago)

therightthere

Name Honey Rider
Location Pigboils
Member Since Jun 10, 2011
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Hey. So. I. Write. Stuff.

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Wheelchairs and Indian Food

Wheelchairs and Indian Food

1 page, updated Sep 22, 2012R
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VAMPIREZ WEREWOLFS JUSTIN BIEBES (an mcr story) WHAAATTTS??!?!?!?!

VAMPIREZ WEREWOLFS JUSTIN BIEBES (an mcr story) WHAAATTTS??!?!?!?!

1 page, updated Jun 29, 2011PG-13Completed
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Im a vampire inlove w my werewolfsisterteacher but were Harry and Ron?!? WHAT???

Im a vampire inlove w my werewolfsisterteacher but were Harry and Ron?!? WHAT???

2 parts / 3 pages, updated Jun 24, 2011PG-13Completed
Windi is a vampire. Her sister is a wherwolve. She only has 1 sistahhhh. They like clothes music and blood. Her dog is scrumptiuz. So are... read more
368 reads votes 5 comments 3
OMFG! IM IN LOVE W/ MY VAMPIRE BROTHER, MY TEACHER, IM A WEREWOLF?NO WAY! (WAY)

OMFG! IM IN LOVE W/ MY VAMPIRE BROTHER, MY TEACHER, IM A WEREWOLF?NO WAY! (WAY)

1 page, updated Jun 22, 2011PG-13Completed
506 reads votes 3 comments 10

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stripmeaway96
stripmeaway96

1 year ago
ur stories are hilarious :)
danielleb333
danielleb333

1 year ago
hi there, I was wondering if you wernt too busy, you could check out some of my storieS? Id love any feedback what so ever you could give me!! lol ....if you like vampires, I have INNOCENT EYES, BLOOD THIRSTY, and BLOOD ANGELS.
as for a normal teen romance with some secrets, check out HUSH :D please and thank you in advance <3

-Danielle Marie<3

Recent Comments

maybe combine some sentences into paragraphs, just so the story flows more.
Blood Thirsty **on hold**

good dialogue
Innocent Eyes

maybe try describing the emotions more than whats physically going on
Hush **on hold**

Italicize thoughts, you have very strong imagery
Blood Angels **on hold**

just maybe adjust the phrasing on the line "Through life and death..." its a bit too long i think to go with your other phrasing.
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