Status: Chapter Five is up! (1 year ago)

tessamarphibate

Name Natalie
Location Venezuela
Birthday Mar 22
Member Since Nov 22, 2011
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- "If there's a book you really want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it."
                                                                          - Toni Morrison

Hello! My name isn't actually Tessa, that's just what I wanted to be called when I first joined. You can call me that or call me by my real name, Natalie. I honestly don't care, I just don't want to change my username now.

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Through Metallic Gold Eyes (On Hiatus)

Through Metallic Gold Eyes (On Hiatus)

6 parts / 16 pages, updated Apr 11, 2012PG
Fifty five years ago, Marphibian X was first spotted in a single citizen of the United States of America. Although this genetic mutation was proved not... read more
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Normal/Different

Normal/Different

1 page, updated Mar 12, 2012GCompleted
The next time you find yourself thinking someone is "weird", ask yourself why that is.
82 reads votes 13 comments 12
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AraiRodz
AraiRodz

3 months ago
Following solely cause of the display pic. It's simply Smashing
jewelsdomp
jewelsdomp

9 months ago
Keep it going, ur a good writer. I hope to get to read it all some day.
@tessamarphibate That's cool I completely understand your situation. Oh and for your age you are an amazing writer. Keep up the great work and get food grades in school:)
tessamarphibate
tessamarphibate

1 year ago
@ChristopherSchifani Uh, various reasons. I am, in general, a slow writer and updater, but school has also gotten a lot busier now that I'm actually..trying to get good grades. xD I also live in Venezuela, where the power situation is getting worse. It has been going off at completely random times for at least two hours each time, and up to..ten hours, I think it's been. I mostly just have time to go on and do my schoolwork, check things, and that's about it.

That's about all the excuses I can muster up. But I don't want to make it seem like I've completely forgotten the story. It is going to go on, trust me. I'm still developing ideas and the seventh chapter /is/ being worked on everyday. It's just going..reaaaally slowly.
So why have you not posted in a while wondering where the sorry is supposed to go from here.
tessamarphibate
tessamarphibate

1 year ago
@Sweet_Writer ..wait so..Funnier pics or more pics?

Hey, it helps if people send 'em in!
FrankKelso
FrankKelso

1 year ago
Real quick, just had to say, holy sh** your 13"?!? You write better than most of my classmates. I'm 21 and go to college, and I'm takeing creative writeing courses as well as speach and english and such, you wouldn't belive some of the dribble I've read or seen. Bravo natalie, I'm a complet fan already!
tessamarphibate
tessamarphibate

1 year ago
"There was distant anger in his eyes, I could tell, it reflected in the light like the cross around his neck."
^ there's a random sentence from the currently being written Chapter Six of Through Metallic Gold Eyes as a sneak peak. :C I'm so sorry if anybody's been waiting, i always take much too long to update. *lazy bitch* It should be up by this weekend..i hope.
tessamarphibate
tessamarphibate

1 year ago
@WetWater2 PROMOTING POWERS UNITE. -fist bumps air-
WetWater2
WetWater2

1 year ago
LOL

Your promoting prevailed! Unicorn5lover read chapter 1 on The Map! :P I started to laugh! :P Ze underestimated power of prooomoting!

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