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terranalleen
2 years ago
So I haven't really written/posted anything in a while--sorry, I've been pretty busy lately. Butttt....if you would like to, I've just made a blog about my writing mostly, and sort of my photography and music on the side. There's not really much up at the moment, but it'll get there eventually. Right now, I probably won't be doing much posting just because I'm still trying to finish my novel, but if I put anything up, I'll let you know!
HollylLouisel94
2 years ago
Hey wud you mind reading my book - there is nothing - and maybe comment and vote? or if you wud prefer reading a completed book then maybe - the maze -:: The maze - Grace Feraras is 15 and for two years she has been waiting to enter the cruellest, hardest and most barbaric Survival program ever. This year she has that chance. The 78th Officials have begun and 10 teams of 10 set out into the unknown. Only teenagers aged 13-17 are allowed to enter this televised horror. The winning team earns Eternal glory and wealth, but at what cost? of course ill return the favour :) x
Aetila
2 years ago
Oops! Sorry 'bout that. >.> Alison is the one I like. MADISON is the one that makes sense to me, I don't really dislike her, but she's alright. Sorry for the confusion, I just felt that both of them were a bit cliche, but I actually kinda like Madison. Their names are just so similar, LOL xDD
Aetila
2 years ago
Okay, I read Dolce Vita. Your grammar, spelling, and plot was practically flawless. I didn't see any plot holes, and your tone and title are very professional! :) I promised I would give nothing but not true opinion and here it is: It's really, really cliche, and annoyed me. I've met people from rich private schools; and they don't ALL act the way that they're depicted. I feel that it's unfair to classify all wealthy people like that. I also don't like how, in the description, it already mentions that all the girls in there are like "Prada, Gucci, Versace!" I think it encourages female stereotypes. Also, very few extremely rich people are A-list celebrities, Tom Cruise was found working at a fast food joint, in fact. Also, I really hate the fact that Alison is only unique because she's in a strange depressed, anti-social zone from her acting career; other than that, she's pretty much the same. I see that, again, way too often. I'm really sorry, please don't take this personally >.>
Aetila
2 years ago
ohmygod! I need you write your comment! GOOOOODDDDD, I'm so sorry >> I updated chapter 2 to PP&U, but I got SO absorbed in the writing and I just had to finish (you understand, right?) But I'm so sorry! I'm going to comment NOW!
Aetila
2 years ago
Thank you so much for those great comments! They're truly supporting and I really don't like what I write. >.> I'm like dizzy every time I read it, I catch all the mistakes, all the things I could have done to make it so much better, and I feel terrible that people are reading that (Well, I guess that's what I get for never double-checking and correcting on intuition xDD) When I see what I write I'm like "eh," on the content, scandalized by the flow and horrid transitions, and once again, I feel bad. Eh, I really am not into first person, I'm a second-third person, but I attempted it for Elven & Pride, Prestige, and The Undead; I think its alright in Elven, but horrible in PP&U, what do you think? xDD >.< I like to keep things balanced, I don't want antagonists to be solidly evil, or at least, not all of them, and I don't like it when the only detailed and intricate character will all the interesting pasts and secrets is the main character; that's why I use third-second person. xDD LOL, sorry for this uber long comment. >.>
Aetila
3 years ago
Hey there! I was wondering if yo u could read one of my stories and comment on it! (voting, f anning, and whatever are all o ptional, its the reviews I nee d!) I'd love to return the fav or, and I will! I know this mig ht annoy you, but anything is greatly appreciated! Thanks fo r reading this! -Celeste My Stories--Gol den Dawn; Karis Gebelin was ju st your typical Hawaii transpl ant to Manhattan, obsessive to p student who actually procras tinates everything, and bound of Ivy; future careerist and c urrent fortune teller. Until-- that is--she finds out everyth ing she aced is more or less a ben trevato--so goodbye model student and striving socialit e--and hello demonslayer/alche mist and automatic industry ty coon--that is, if she survives. Elven Mob Bosse s and Rebel Heirs--Welcome to a world where elves,well, aren 't your fairy tale elves. Rule d in a ochlocracy, of Oligarch s and tech savvy megacorporati ons, of underworld criminal ru le, resistance in this mobocra cy is futile when your King ca n be your dishwasher in one da y. Intergalactic bestseller an d future Oligarch, Kronos fød t av Mørke’skala soon finds out how his fickle world migh t change--with his help too.
watermelonsushi
3 years ago
thanx for becoming my fan! i really appreciate it! :)
watermelonsushi
3 years ago
helloo!! fellow marshmellows...i mean humans!!! i know you get tired of these massages and ya they are really annoying cuz i personally think so too, but can you please check out my stories The Last Angel and License To Steal...Your Heart? thanx a ton! i really wouldnt be sending these messages, but its the only solution to getting my stories out there! (seriously, this is like, my plan Z) :P thank you so so much for your time, and i would absolutely be honoured to retourn the favor!! :) :) ahh, so much for plan... (ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ) oh i got it! plan Y :( teehee okay thanx!! :) :) XD XD well The Last Angel is about a girl who finds out that she's the last angel and her mission on earth is to grant someone's wish to the person who can figure out her angel name. hunted down by angel seekers, she is forced to go on the run, uncovering secrets about her culture, and emotions for her guardian. License To Steal...Your Heart? is about a girl and a boy who are sent to take their talent necklaces, a persons most prized possession, from each other. together, they find out about each others mission while uncovering forbidden emotions while they face an unexpected twist that will change their lives forever. thanx for ur time!!
CreatingBalance...
3 years ago
Hello, my name is brie and it's lovely to meet you! ^^ Anyway, if it isn't too much to ask, i would like to request that you take a look at one of my stories? 'Change of Fate' is at #15 on the What's Hot List, and im really eager to get it higher in ranking. (: And 'The Revolution' is at #95, and it would be great to get that higher, too. if you havn't got enough time, then it's fine; but i would appreciate all the comments/votes i can get! (:
