@FullofMysteries I don't like her much either... She always just whines. Nothing is ever good enough. I'm liking her less and less. Royalty vs Rogues Seems like Miranda is getting whinier. She throws fits if she doesn't get her way. Using sex to get what she wants then denies him once she gets... Royalty vs Rogues OK there is a Noah later, as the older brother. But he isn't in the first chapter lol. Love and Cool Water Who is Noah? I think it's supposed to be Luke, not Noah bc he is the one who would have walked away and so far there is no Noah in the story.... Love and Cool Water Not sure if someone mentioned it, but you've spelled Abby three different ways... Abbey, Abby, and Abbie. Just thought I'd point that out lol. The Prodigal Daughter