@lovemehunni aww its because i like your writing =)

@musikluver hey i read your story. good recommendation,
different concept and it's great as far as first stories go but editing will help improve the story.. especially in the beginning i found myself questioning the people's pov ...sometimes you got the names mixed up. ex. umm instead of it being marlin.. you'd put jack with diana... stuff like that it confuses the reader although its clarified later at times.
also
you should try incorporating info or some plots into the story rather than posting it as an a/n (author's note).. hinting at a plot change is alright but not specifics you know.. ex. introducing diana's brother and saying in your a/n that he'll now be attending school with them.. instead of that maybe hint that we'll be seeing more of him in the story and then incorporate his arrival or his plan of staying in the city to attend school within a conversation or something.
just a few pointers. other than that continue writing. like your story. happy Halloween! =)