I just hope Karen is not pregnant... maybe she told Chaz and that's why he tried to talk Nathan into getting back with her.
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Description: “I will hurt you for this. I don't know how yet, but give me time. A day will come when you think yourself safe and happy, and suddenly your joy will turn to ashes in your mouth, and you'll know the debt is paid.” ...
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so all of them are under the legal age? tyler is 12, and rihanna is 15... it's a great story but I imagined them being older, now that I know their real age I'm kind of disappointed, though I'm sure you've mentioned it before and it was just something I ignored. I'll just keep thinking they're older haha
I kind of like the story so far but I find it to be very confusing when you change the way the story is being told (e.g. third page last two paragraphs: it changes from "she didn't understand it" to "when we reached" - first you speak as an outsider and then in first person). Other than that type of mistake everything is pretty good.