Hello....
I was wondering of you could read my previous stories. One is “Silent Partner” and I’m done uploading the first 3 chapters. If you have some time, please read it. Here are some lines.......
From chapter one:
The little girl was about to say something, but then, she was shoted by a pistol. She was trying to tell something, but I can't seem to understand. I rushed her to the nearest hospital but it's too late. She died. Now, there are no clues left, no witnesses, and no hope. I lost hope since then.
I can't sleep that night. What was the little girl's connection to the incident? I thought. Again, no results were found. I hate those policemen. I hate those investigators. They were useless! So, I just decided to solve my problem myself.
From chapter two:
"What is it? Let go!" I exclaimed.
"You are very popular. The whole campus is talking and buzzing news- all about you." He whispered.
"So what, you need to stalk me?"
"It's a shame of you. All of the students don't like you." He laughed.
From chapter three:
When Kyle saw my sobbing face, he asked me. I told him the reason and he smiled. "I know a place where you can put your costume without being noticed. I can lead you there...if you want to." he added as he laugh. I faked a smile as I nodded.
I followed him. "There." he whispered as he pointed into a totally dark room.
"Thanks. You can absolutely go now. I said go!" I exclaimed.
"I won't actually peek. You don't need to worry." Then he rushed to the room.
And the other one is entitled “Would you have the COURAGE to read this? (Don’t worry, it’s only the title)....................
Please leave some comments/ suggestions and don’t forget to vote if you liked the story. Thanks a lot and love lots.
~~Kyasurin07~~
Hey to my fans!!! I've started to properly write a story called HELLmount high, and I was wondering if your check it out!!!!! Pretty pretty please with a cherry on the top! And wirte some suggestions?
Hey there! I was wondering when you have the time can you please read a story of mine? Here’s four that I need some criticism on:
A New Maid And a Beautiful Bachelor Don’t mix!: romance/humor/ drama
Evett Castillo finds herself working for one of the most handsome bachelors in England. The only problem though is the fact that he takes pride in making her life a living hell.
Life Inside White walls: supernatural / romance
At the tender age of five, she claims to see a man who she called her guardian angel. Now Felicia, sixteen and broken, is trapped in a highly secured mental hospital. What will happen when the angel turns out to be real? And what if this angel wasn’t truly what it seemed?
Never Meant To Be: romance/ supernatural/ angels/demons/
Cecilia Sophie was meant to marry a man she never met by her forceful parents, but that was the last straw. In the late of night she manages to run away from her home in hope of finding the freedom she longed for. Unfortunately though, that was the day when she realized some things aren’t meant to be.
"Beautiful Beautiful" fantasy/romance/ supernatural
Adora is a Halfling. With the blood of a shifter and witch running through her veins, she finds herself not welcomed in her village. Now on the run, she finds herself in the falling for the shifter Prince who that happens to rule over the Kingdom of the west. Seeing that he's looking for a mate and she has no place to go, what will happen between the two?
It would make my day if you could comment on how they are :)
Thank you,
-Silverlove