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potime

Name Lady in Question
Location over the lake, through the woods, where wild poetry grows
Birthday Nov 18
Member Since Aug 11, 2010
Votes Received 36
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I'm the question mark lady.

I write for enjoyment. This does not mean it is not a passion of mine! For me, my passions have to bring incredible joy to me. Without joy there can be no greatness. 

Please give me feedback on my poems! My poems need lots of work! 

The only way I can improve them is if you give me advice!!! Become a fan and vote for my poems!

I love reading other's poetry so please put a link on my message board to your favorite poetry!!

"Throughout life people will make you mad, disrespect you and treat you bad. Let god deal with the things they do, cause hate in your heart will consume you too."	

"Sometimes a man wants to be stupid if it lets him do a thing his cleverness forbids." - Will Hamilton in "East of Eden"

XO- Lady in Question

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Over the hills, through the woods, where the wild poetry grows

Over the hills, through the woods, where the wild poetry grows

4 parts / 1 page, updated May 27, 2012PGVideo
My poetry! New and old please read and enjoy
317 reads votes 6 comments 5
Picture Perfect Eden

Picture Perfect Eden

1 page, updated Mar 24, 2012
35 reads votes 2 comments 4
Currently

Currently

1 page, updated Feb 24, 2012G
43 reads votes 1 comments 2
Dust: The Beginning

Dust: The Beginning

1 page, updated Jan 15, 2012PG
Amelia's 16th birthday is in a few months now and she couldn't be any more bland. The only person who encouraged excitement and daring curiosity was her grandmother and ... read more
41 reads votes 1 comments 2
Truth Equals Insanity

Truth Equals Insanity

1 page, updated Sep 16, 2011G
tags / Nomesob
56 reads votes 3 comments 5
Finding Wingade

Finding Wingade

2 parts / 2 pages, updated Aug 17, 2011PG
Carry Wingade is a sophomore in high school; she is going through that ‘find yourself’ stage. Through this search,she qill find a unique gift for writing and will unwrap it... read more
110 reads votes 4 comments 3
People Like Me

People Like Me

3 parts / 3 pages, updated Aug 15, 2011PG-13VideoPictures
Tom Walsh is a quiet, observant, and fun guy around his friends. You can get this just from looking at him and his delicious body, chiseled looks..... blindly hot muscles.. ... read more
228 reads votes 4 comments 0
Splash, Shatter, Crash

Splash, Shatter, Crash

1 page, updated Aug 07, 2011PG
tags / nomesob
71 reads votes 3 comments 8
incased vs. open minded

incased vs. open minded

1 page, updated Jul 31, 2011
tags / Nomesob
34 reads votes 1 comments 2
barren

barren

1 page, updated Jul 31, 2011
tags / Nomesob
69 reads votes 2 comments 3

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@breaking_tables_ I'll start working! I thought noone even likeed this story!
Finding Wingade

@Hereandnow thank you!
Picture Perfect Eden

loved it! I only suggest that you stay away from making some of your lines to wordy because then they start to look more like prose than poetry....
Gone with the Snow

I get the sense that you very much want your poem to have rhythm. However, I don't think it helps your poem when you use the improper tense like...
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