About

I have an obsession with quotes, books, words, office supplies, and laughing at stupid things. I love potatoes, but I hate cheese and ketchup. 

I love debating, politics, history, literature, and google (it supports my addiction for research). 

I'm twenty-six years old.

I get bored easily..I'm actually bored right now.

 I ♥ music; I listen to anything from any genre or decade except metal and techno. People need air to live, I need coffee. I love the color orange, and I hate being politically correct or censored.

Umm...what else...

 I don't have a facebook or anything like that, I don't want my whole life to revolve around the internet or my phone. Life is too short and too important for that stuff.  

I'm married to @markm2684 and I'm a mommy to our beautiful daughter Lulu. Always in love and always lucky to have my best friend as my hubby and to have an amazing baby girl. 

Wattpad: I do critiques, but I'm not always available long enough to give good critiques, but I do as much as I can.

Thank gosh, I think I'm done with the "about me" thingy.

My other account for short stories, essays, and books:  @un_censor. 

Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.---Anton Chekhov

I appreciate all the support.
  • Location:
    Texas
  • Joined:
    2 years ago

Reading Lists


9 Published Works

Featured work.

Optimism

Social data: 65 reads. 9 votes. 8 comments.

Description: Tasting the bad till the last drop.

#387 in Poetry

Other Works by poieo_arbil.
Laundry Rain

Laundry Rain

17 1 3

Rinse cycle on a rainy day.

Paper Cuts

Paper Cuts

58 3 8

Love truly makes you blind. We all have to live with our choices, but not forever if we choose not to...

Convince

Convince

45 5 6

Assortment of poetry for contests.

n a p k i n s

n a p k i n s

191 15 10

A collection of poetry over the years. Just "napkin" writings (short and random thoughts)

poieo_arbil commented on Coast - Red Headed Dragon


poieo_arbil
This is actually my favorite part. You're revealing Claire a little more and also giving us more insight to the narrator and how he thinks. He's actually really funny and I like the connection between her being born in the year of the dragon, to her personality, then to her appearance, and then back to her attitude. It all works together well. This is really good.
poieo_arbil commented on Coast - Small Minds


poieo_arbil
I enjoy the narrator's sense of humor and I like the dialogue, it is entertaining and realistic. I like how natural this is, it's easy to get into. I can't wait to get to know the narrator.
poieo_arbil commented on Coast - Jerry-Rig


poieo_arbil
So far I like that you didn't divulge too much about the characters and why the narrator isn't close to her/his sister. I also like the overall tone. A very great start.