hey there :)
just randomly passing by to try and be helpful... don't mean to sound abnoxious... u see, my first language is romanian so...
i could give you a tip about your vampire love story... the title is awkwardly translated... :) u might want to change it into: Povestea mea cu vampiri (My vampire story... only the meaning is my vmapire love story, because the word story doesn't describe completely the word 'poveste') or Vampirii in povestea mea de dragoste (vampires in my love story) or Dragostea in povestea mea cu vampiri (Love in my vampire story) or id u want it to mean exactly my vamp love story - Povestea mea de dragoste cu vampiri....
anyway, just a random tip... sorry i haven't read it, i'm kinda bored of vamps... sorry :) but i loved ur poems!
i'd send this as a private message but i hear more than one user has problems with reading them so i'll just post it here.. hope u don't mind!