Joined:2 years ago
Description: Iva Z. is as normal as girl could be.She never thought her life could turn in 360 in a day and it all started when she was celebrating her 17th birthday.. It's fate what brought them together but it's faith what make them stay together. (i suck at d...
your story and writing hooked me in the beginning, it was really good in the middle, but your ending is just flop. either this is the cut version or you rushing it too much, thus becoming a mess. i hope your next story would be more detailed and plan, dont be dissapointed with my critic, i hope you do well. thank you