Aetila
2 years ago

Hey there! 
If you've got some extra, bored, time; I was wondering if you could read one of my stori es and comment on it! (voting , fanning, and whatever are all optional, its the reviews I need!) I'd love to return the favor, and I will! 
I know this might annoy you, but anything is greatly appreciated! Thanks for reading this! 
-Celeste 
My Stories--Golden Dawn; Karis Gebelin was just your typical Hawaii transplant to Manhattan, obsessive top student who actually procrastinates everything, and bound of Ivy; future careerist and current fortune teller. Until-- that is--she finds out everything she aced is more or less a ben trevato-- so good bye model student and striving socialite--and hello demons layer/alchemist and automatic industry tycoon--that is, if she survives. 

Pride, Prestige, and The Undead-- When Aislinn LeBlanc went to boarding school, she expected to be working hard and standing out with her scholastic honors and economist talents in a sea of high-society spoiled brats in their opulent playground. Little did the senator's daughter know, however, that she was entering a world where your rich and famous can kill, slaughter, and hack things like no one's business.African mythology, action, and secrets of success all come together in this tale of zombieslaying and prestige. 

Empire Wars-- Kiers was fed up with his life in a small town in Iowa--until, that is, when he and his friends are offered to risk life and mind to test a new breakthrough "video game." Empire Wars was designed to be the most difficult game in the world, where dying is just too easy.

P.S. I know you get a lot of these, but I'll say it; I really don't think my main characters are Mary Sues & Gary Stus, they aren't gorgeous, extremely talented, maybe have one talent, but that's it. My stories also are not centered around one cliche relationship between two gorgeous people or whatever, and I really hope you can try comment! 
Thank you for the time!

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Emmiie
2 years ago

Like vampire stories? Well, sink your teeth into this!

'The Not So Secret Life of Helena Callahan'

^ My story follows a teenage runaway, who sells her body to make a living. And her not so average life is about to get even more bizarre when she meets a guy who gives her a little more then she bargained for. ;-)

-- Emma.

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Aetila
3 years ago

Hey there! 
I'm new to Watt pad, and I was wondering if y o u could read one of my sto ri es and comment on it! (voti ng , f anning, and whatever ar e a ll o ptional, its the revi ews I nee d!) I'd love to retu rn the fav or, and I will! 
I know this mig ht annoy you, but anything i s greatly appreciated! Thanks f o r reading this! 
-Celeste 
My Stories--Gol den Dawn; Karis Gebelin was j u st your typical Hawaii tra ns pl ant to Manhattan, obsess ive to p student who actually pro cras tinates everything, and b ound of Ivy; future care erist and c urrent fortune tel ler. U ntil-- that is--she fin ds out everyth ing she aced is more o r less a ben trevato-- so good bye model student and strivin g socialit e--and hell o demons layer/alche mist and automatic industry ty coon--t hat is, if she survives. 

Elven Mob Bosse s and Rebel Heirs--Welcome t o a world where elves,well, a re n 't your fairy tale elves. Ru le d in a ochlocracy, of O liga rch s and tech savvy mega­corpo rati ons, of underworld crimin al ru le, resistance in this m obocra cy is futile wh en your King ca n be your dish washer i n one da y. Intergala ctic best seller an d future O ligarch, K ronos fød t av Mø rke’skala soon finds out ho w his fickl e world migh t cha nge--with his help too.

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serval
3 years ago

Hey, I know the­­­­­­­­se are super ann­oy­in­g,­ a­nd­ I­'m­ not gonna beg
But I have this story called
'An Albino On A­­­­­­­­ Reality Show.. ­Wh­at­ c­ould go wrong?'
that I was hopi­­­­­­­­ng you could tak­e ­a ­lo­ok­ a­t ­an­d ­give­ my ­some feedback!
Thanks, I know ­­­­­­­­these get annoying!
(:

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SyerraJaneXoXoX
3 years ago

Hey I'm just stopping by to see if you want to check out one of my storys...
"Mysterys of the Night" or "Love Shaken, and Broken" Maybe vote or comment???
It would mean alot:D

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dotspolka
3 years ago

heyy!!
can you please read my story 'Love Sucks.....And So Do Vampires'?
vote and gimme feedback on how it is so far
fan too if u like it
thanks=)

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shevamae
3 years ago

Could you pleas­e read my story?! i would real­ly be greatful!! you don't hav­e to coment or anything just r­ead it and it will be fine by ­me!! Please???!!! 

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luna17
3 years ago

@Ruby_theDarkQueen 
thank you :)

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luna17
3 years ago

heh heh, thank you. and i'd love to read your story :)

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oiram13
3 years ago

Hey..!
I noticed you're a new member..
so WELCOME to the world of WORDS...!
lol..

Will you please read my story?
INTENTIONS: HER WAS MONEY, HIM WAS LUST... WHERE WILL IT END?

Don't forget to leave your comments/messages..
and please vote..
OR
be a fan if you want..!

IT'S YOUR CHOICE..!

THANKS IN ADVANCE,..!
GB..

*smiles*

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