I have the attention span of a goldfish.
I am addicted to Diet Coke.
I've decided to remove my supernatural stories, possibly temporarily, but i just don't think i have the imaginative genius to write about a made up world. However, i tend to change my mind a lot so this may change especially as i have a fascination with that stuff. Anyway, please give my latest story a go depsite the cliched title it hopefully isn't too cliche and i intend to make it thoroughly romantic. Being that i'm a sucker for all that stuff.
My latest upload is called "Resistance is Futile." I know i've used this title before, but this is a completely different story and it's the only thing i can think of that really fits. After all, i think it describes Lacey's struggle to stop herself falling in love rather well.
Synopsis for Resistance is Futile:
Lacey is a university student from Buckinghamshire whose just moved to London with best friend Tammy. They’re shacked up in a pokey flat with the boyish Jack and the possibly gay Andrew. On a drunken night out Lacey meets George and ends up in his bed the next morning, naked. She can’t remember anything that happened and sets out to find the truth –the big question being whether or not she lost her virginity to this stranger. But, George seems intent on making things difficult for her. She battles with embarrassing situations, unknown emotions and George’s roommates before finally finding the truth. She’d always thought that as soon as he told her that’d be it, she’d never see him again. But now that’s the case can she resist his cocky charm and softer side? Or will her stubborn nature stand in the way of true love?
Anyway, if you'd like me to read your story i'd be happy to, although i might take a while to reply i will get round to it and enjoy reading people's stories.
Go on. Fan me. I'll read your stuff too =]
Anyway lol, beginning aside, I named her Feya because I first started writing it by hande. The real name is Freya, but I dunno, my incorrection suited her better by then.
Yeah as you can see I waste no time going into the story. I think it can be a little confusing for a reader, but I like to immerse them into a whole new word, leaving little comments so that the second read can still be as interesting as the first... or at least that's the theory.
Anyway, see you around. It was nice talking to you.
hey just wondering if you could read some of my poems it would be awesome if you could i am litterally just about to check out your story. so if you could read comment vote? on my poems it would be amazing thank you :D
Thanks.
And I know the problem. What you could do is write a preface or a prologe to help entice your readers. Sometimes a novel doesn't need that but not all readersw will give you the benefite of the doubt. Anyway, it's perfectly fine how you've done it and good luck with your writing. I hope it does well.
Hey, I read chapter one of story and left you a comment =]
Anyway, I was hoping you could return the favour and read, vote, comment, fan - anything, it's all appreciated.
If not see you around, and good luck with your writing.
So, i've just updated "Resistance is Futile". Sadly, their date is not included -i got a little sidetracked with introducing George's roommates. And decided to show some more of how they felt about eachother.
Sorry about the recent bombardment of messages :)
Thanks xx
I've just read through that message i just sent and it's littered with errors so sorry for that. Oh and sorry for repeating myself about the boring thing -this is what happens when i don't write things on word first!
'ello, 'ello, 'ello (i used to love that show)
I'm caught at a crossroads and completely at a loss of what to do, so i was wondering whether anyone would give me a little advice. Perhaps that was a little dramatic, but i am in dire need of some help, or advice is anyone's willing.
I want to write the night George and Lacey met, but i don't whether to do it in George's pov, Lacey's or both.
Also if i did it in George's i'd have to add it in before the other two chapters, just because i don't really know where else i'd put it.
And Lacey would have to have something trigger off the memory.
Anyway, i'm currently writing their date -which i'm finding a little difficult because i'm not 100% certain about how i want it to go- and i was also wondering if anyone had any opinions on the pov they'd want it in. At the moment it's all in Lacey's and she's standing outside his door, it's about a page long on word, but i can write it from both - i think. So, i could do George's pov when he opens the door and stuff. I wouldn't to the whole thing in both because that's be a bit boring and i want the story to be more about Lacey, and it'd be a bit boring -i think.
So, if you have an opinion then message me on here.
Oh, and i've edited Lacey's eye colour to a Jade green on a whim :)
On another note, i've got some other stories floating about in my head and some ideas for a few of the old ones i took down so i might be posting some new stuff soon -the only problem is i get sidetracked really easily, as aforementioned i have the attention span of a goldfish. But, if you have any requests of stories you want me to continue or anything i'd be happy to for most of them and if it's one i'm not too interested in then i'd be happy just to email you the rest or something.
So thanks for listening to my babble - or reading lol xx