jessieandteko

Name Jessie and Teko
Location Earth
Member Since May 08, 2012
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Zombie Plumbers Chapter One

Zombie Plumbers Chapter One

1 page, updated May 09, 2012PG
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A Bully Confronted

A Bully Confronted

2 pages, updated May 09, 2012PG
50 reads votes 0 comments 0
Dangerous Discovery

Dangerous Discovery

4 pages, updated May 08, 2012PGPictures
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You'll find that action scenes like this one are much easier to write with shorter sentences. The tempo of a chase is vital to generating...
Assassin's Guild

One thing you might want to look at is the man's reaction to Evangeline's apparently unique ability to remember her name even though he didn't...
Bitten

Your opening paragraph is brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. Work on it some more. The situation you have the characters in is well...
My Sucky, Wonderful Life

It might do well to have more dialogue to balance the internal thoughts of Nicola. This will help the reader understand what the other characters...
The Rumored Half