hey my name is jazz and i live in ireland
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I love this story it jut really bugs me that the whole story you spelt definitely wrong... Sorry that's such a petty comment and it's a great story I just think interrupts the flow. I'm sure you would have fixed it after you've edited.
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If you think that Irish people haven't faced oppression and abuse, you're wrong. If you think that Northern Ireland is past its troubles, you're wrong. It sickens me that this happens only a few hund...
It's really terrible what goes on in Northern Ireland! I'm catholic as well but as I live in the republic so that's pretty normal. I just wanted to point out that it's not only Catholics being persisted by Protestants for their beliefs. It goes both ways. I'm really up set hearing that it's still so bad because I had thought it was starting to get better!
"YOU IDIOT" Crimson bellowed, as he came towards me hand raised and balled into a fist.
I don't think you need commas there
I thing you mean sustenance x
• They do NOT sparkle (that is just gay)
Using gay in that context is very derogatory! It should never be used as an insult. If someone used your name or a strong characteristic of yours to signify something bad you would be offended