hey my name is jazz and i live in ireland
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Another very important thing about naming your characters: Every character's name should start with a different letter of the alphabet. Don't have two main characters named Bella and Bonnie, or Paul...
It's like Sauron and Saruman from lord of the rings!
I see no radon Annie shouldn't be Asian! Just don't let it make up her character because a lot if writers do that and it really annoys me. Actually to be fair all of your characters are really well developed so I'm sure it'll be great! Good on you