We'll not old but he'd be 30 and all his friends would still be teenagers
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Harry Potter and the time turner thing, for example: why didn't he just go back to when Voldy was a kid and do away with him before all that shit went down? (if there's an actual explanation to this...
He couldn't go back 15 years because he'd have to live 15 years of his life hiding in the past! He be an old man before he got back to the present!
Another very important thing about naming your characters: Every character's name should start with a different letter of the alphabet. Don't have two main characters named Bella and Bonnie, or Paul...
It's like Sauron and Saruman from lord of the rings!
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I see no radon Annie shouldn't be Asian! Just don't let it make up her character because a lot if writers do that and it really annoys me. Actually to be fair all of your characters are really well developed so I'm sure it'll be great! Good on you