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its_dbigs

Location Las Vegas
Birthday Dec 09
Member Since Jun 18, 2011
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Hello everyone!

My name is Daron. 

I mainly write poetry. Everything I write has a little something to do with how I feel at that moment, so I never get the inspiration to write unless I am sad, angry, depressed, or emotional. Feel free to check out some of my poetry. 

I also write stories. My first story, She Took My Breath Away, is complete and those of you who like my romance poetry or like romance will like that story.

Those of you who like murder, horror, suspense, and mystery, I have a story called We The Jury Find You Dead. Trust, it will have you hooked from the start...or at least that's what my fans say...

I love talking to people! So PM me or drop a message on my board. I don't bite...hard.

I appreciate those that take the time to read my work!

Goals!
500 Fans
100,000 reads on She Took My Breath Away
1000 votes on She Took My Breath Away
100 votes on We The Jury Find You Dead
10,000 reads on We The Jury Find You Dead
Get a novel in the top 5 of any list
Get a poem in the top 10 of any list

Works

More Than Friends (Poetic Short Story)

More Than Friends (Poetic Short Story)

1 page, updated Apr 17, 2012
85 reads votes 3 comments 1
First Crush

First Crush

1 page, updated Apr 17, 2012
39 reads votes 2 comments 0
Rescue Me

Rescue Me

1 page, updated Apr 17, 2012
13 reads votes 0 comments 0
Love Letter

Love Letter

2 pages, updated Apr 17, 2012
23 reads votes 0 comments 0
It Gets Better

It Gets Better

1 page, updated Apr 17, 2012
16 reads votes 0 comments 0
What is Love?

What is Love?

7 pages, updated Apr 17, 2012
31 reads votes 0 comments 0
Going Home

Going Home

4 pages, updated Mar 11, 2012
11 reads votes 0 comments 0
Beauty

Beauty

1 page, updated Mar 11, 2012
27 reads votes 0 comments 2
We The Jury Find You Dead

We The Jury Find You Dead

10 parts / 30 pages, updated Jan 31, 2012PG-13
Joshua Maurice Vanderbosh, also known as the 'Bad Girl' killer, has been sentenced to life for killing numerous young girls in a country-wide serial killing spree... read more
3,350 reads votes 145 comments 87
Dear Adam

Dear Adam

5 pages, updated Jan 11, 2012Video
140 reads votes 5 comments 3

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1 year ago
Hello all, I've posted about four new poems and two short stories for you. Though I haven't been on here much, I haven't stopped writing. Thanks for all your support now and in the future.
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1 year ago
Hello all! Just dropping in to tell you that I am doing some revision work on She Took My Breath Away. A while back I had an editor from USC (For those who don't know, that the University of Southern California) edit my book and she pointed out a few major plot flaws in it. Therefore I am giving the story a bit of a makeover. The main part of the story won't change much, but a few of the characters will do slightly different things. That also means that some chapters will change, and some will be deleted entirely. The bottomline is, I was thinking about taking She Too My Breath Away down and repostng it. My question is, who would like to re-read the story and its changes? Let me know what you think!
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1 year ago
For those of you who recently fanned me, thank you! I know that I don't upload much anymore, and I'm apologize for that. But I am truly grateful that you all support me in my passion.
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1 year ago
Posted a new short story called Going Home and a new poem called Beauty. Would love it if you checked them out. I might post some other poems as well later on.
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1 year ago
In the mood to write a short story, but I need some ideas to jumpstart some brainstorming. Help?
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1 year ago
Anyone wanna make me happy and read my stories? In return, I read whatever you have. So this is a R4R opportunity.
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1 year ago
Got TWO chapters of We The Jury posted for you. My other works are still in progess though.
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1 year ago
Hey everyone! I hope all is going well for you guys. Just an update on my stories. I am almost done with We The Jury and I might have a few chapters to upload. Dear Adam is still in the works, and just needs some TLC. That one is next. And maybe just maybe I'll post some poems. but only if you REALLY want me to. Anyway, I will post them all together, so I'd say give me another week? Maybe? Should be sooner, I hope. I'll just keep you all updated on what happens. Thanks!
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1 year ago
I won't be uploading for a while. Not that I won't be writing, but I will just not be putting up anything for a bit. Currently working on the next chapter of Dear Adam, thinking of working on We The Jury and.... I have SURPRISE story that I will post later too. So keep your eyes peeled for some updates, but not for a few weeks!
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1 year ago
okay people, She Took My Breath Away is about to soar to new heights. I am currently editing it. I thought of a major scene that could really help the book. So I am adding it in. Also, I shall begin the slow but necessary process of picking apart every word and editing as I go. Sooner or later, I will have a polished book. And I will begin writing the next chapter of Dear Adam once I have more people reading it.

By the way, would anyone be willing to re-read parts of She Took My Breath Away so that they could see the changes?

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note. no need to change it up
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Great work on this, though I kind of wanted to see how she lived in hiding for a bit longer. The way its written makes it feel like she was caught...
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The one thing I like most about this story is that it is an attention grabber. I was able to follow along and not get bored. What held me was the...
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that statement proves that you missed the point.
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