The story is going okay. I absolutely agree with Natalie; Kayden has a lot to prove. v.v
I wouldn't say I hate him but after all he's done to Natalie and especially after what he just did; I wouldn't mind seeing him strangled. -.-
I really appreciate how you've made her resist him. She has to go through a healing process. Who'd run willingly into the arms of someone who terrorized you for years?
Keep up the good work! =]