Story is good but I would recommend some major editing before u put it up for sale. Twisting You I have read a lot of books by many different author and your writing is almost perfect. For a novice writer you are fantastic the only issue I... The Black Rose Killer (Majo... I think Its the homeroom teacher he spits when he talks and the day after his most satisfying kill he was in a great mood The Black Rose Killer (Majo...