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a̲n̲y̲w̲a̲y̲,̲ ̲ι̲ ̲d̲o̲n̲'̲т̲ ̲d̲o̲ ̲ғ̲o̲l̲l̲o̲w̲-̲т̲o̲-̲ғ̲o̲l̲l̲o̲w̲ ̲т̲н̲ι̲n̲g̲ ̲a̲n̲d̲ ̲a̲ѕ̲ ̲y̲o̲υ̲ ̲c̲a̲n̲ ̲ѕ̲e̲e̲,̲ ̲ι̲ ̲o̲n̲l̲y̲ ̲ғ̲o̲l̲l̲o̲w̲ ̲ғ̲e̲w̲ ̲p̲e̲o̲p̲l̲e̲.̲ ̲т̲н̲e̲y̲ ̲a̲r̲e̲ e̲ι̲т̲н̲e̲r̲ ̲м̲y̲ ̲ғ̲r̲ι̲e̲n̲d̲ѕ̲ ̲o̲r̲ ̲т̲н̲e̲y̲ ̲a̲r̲e̲ ̲a̲м̲a̲z̲ι̲n̲g̲ ̲p̲e̲o̲p̲l̲e̲ ̲н̲e̲r̲e̲ ̲o̲n̲ ̲w̲a̲т̲т̲p̲a̲d̲.̲ ̲


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3 Published Works

Featured work.

I Think It's L.O.V.E

Social data: 1.5K reads. 97 votes. 142 comments.

Description: Savannah Anne Sanders is first ever bullied by the guy Evan Reeds. When she couldn't handle it anymore, she agrees with a deal with him which is to be his girlfriend. Somehow, between those pretending days, she is able to witness his other side. On...


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Words Left; Unsaid

Words Left; Unsaid

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There are things in my life, that I couldn't say to them. They are the words in my heart that are left...

Wattpad's Next Rising Star (Contest Book)

Wattpad's Next Rising Star (Contest Book)

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Hello there! So here's my Contest Book for Wattpad's Next Rising Star contest. :D Enjoy my stories! :) ...

flossybitch commented on Love, Prison, and Murder - prolouge


flossybitch
It's an intriguing start. I like how it ended because it brings more thrill on what will happen next. Like...it makes the reader anticipate more of what's coming next. 

You write decent enough. The last word in the first paragraph, don't you think it's *Accepted ? :) I guess that's just typo.

I think this prologue could give something more. More like...the feels or the feeling of being there. I mean, it's okay already but I think a little more push on the feeling and the surrounding of the characters would improve the chapter. But that's just my opinion.

But overall, it's a nice start. Just keep on writing.

PS: I like the cover. Sets the mood of the story. :D