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zailyn26
9 months ago
i want to ask your opinion on something ... so me and a few friends of mine always talk about this thing we had ever since last year . it about this group of survivors from an outburst of a very ancient virus . unknowingly these group of people was very skilled surviving this outburst . so months have past and they have traveled half way around the world ( it started at the Philippines and they were already somewhere in Russia ) thats when one of the members was attacked by a weird girl who put a runic spell on her . when the others found out , one of the members used a counter rune . thats when they knew a bit of their hidden selves . they continued to move around the world and many things happened to them , like they were picked up by a camper which was from camp half-blood . only the survivors wasnt half they were 3/4 a god . the stor goes on and its realllllyyyyy long . im just wondering what your opinion is on that summary and if you think it might go well. PLEASE AND THANK YOU :D
dogluvva99
9 months ago
@Freakadoodle I don't mind Jason. I guess in the first book I felt he was trying to replace Percy and I was like Hades to the No! I've read a lot of fanfictions of reading Percy Jackson stories and sometimes I find they don't do enough of something or too much of something. I read one where it was ONLY jokes and it was funny, but when you see your death it is not exactly funny. Or too dramatic. All the gods and goddesses won't try to protect Percy's death and there isn't supposed to be a fight every single sentence. If you think I need something or I should take something out, tell me. I don't mind criticism at all! I actually really appreciate it! One of my fans told me her opinion and I decided I would would make a schedule so I don't forget to update. It was really helpful! Bye! Eat carrots, but not the bunny.
NaturallyMe
10 months ago
@dogluvva99 Your story had a totally different plot from the others! I just couldn't remember who wrote what, I what I'm saying xD And I WANNA HEAR JASON GIVE PROPS TO PERCY BECAUSE PERCY IS SO OBVIOUSLY BETTER. AND JASON IS JEALOUS. AND YEAH. But you don't have to xD
dogluvva99
10 months ago
@Freakadoodle I can't remember... As I said it's been a while, but I think so. Do you want me to add anything for the next chapter? Something to make it seem BOOOOOOOM!!! Or a thun thun thun moment. I'm gonna make a hero go bye for the chapter after this chapter. It will probably be Theseus so I can add Chiron. What story did you think mine was similar to? I'm gonna scout this person out and decide whether they deserve cheese and lilacs (very important gift).
NaturallyMe
10 months ago
@dogluvva99 Oh, I didn't see any others with past heroes mentioned! There are a lot where the characters are sent into the past to read with the gods, so I can't remember each author for each plot, you know? And I think I'll read hers! Is it good?
dogluvva99
10 months ago
@Freakadoodle Is there another on Wattpad with past heroes? I seriously didn't know. If you're talking about the one on fanfiction.net by PrincessSerenityforever no I'm not that epic. I used that inspiration although the only part that is similar are the descriptions. I'm not making it too similar, at least I hope not because I haven't read it in awhile... It will be different in most ways because I'm trying to make it different. Yeah that works. Working on it right now! Wish me blue cookies!
NaturallyMe
10 months ago
@dogluvva99 Aww, thanks! And yay for continuing! And another yay or the old goin poof! Woohoo! And I really did like the last chapter. I'm just seriously looking forward to the next one because, you know, it's seriously epic, and I wanna see their reactions. Your story is the one with the past heroes too, right? I'm sorry, I'd been reading a lot of these stories where the characters read their books xD
dogluvva99
10 months ago
@Freakadoodle I love your username! I will continue writing because my cold went poof. I don't know if I can follow my deadline of Friday because I haven't gotten ANYTHING down yet... I will try. I hoped you liked my latest chapter because I tried to make it long for y'all (hehe that's fun to say).
NaturallyMe
10 months ago
Hey! I like your version of the reading ofThe Lightning Thief! Just wanted to tell you that... It's pretty well-written and is also pretty funny, so yeah xD anyways, I like it. Yes. Good. Continue, please!
dogluvva99
10 months ago
The Mark of Athena on HIATUS. ON HOLD.
